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spadeguy (2013-07-09 02:33:47)I guess this is also the sign up thread too... soo... go nuts!
I should probably write a new story... but will I finish it?
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
MeNobody14 (2013-07-09 02:46:59)Yay "orpnans!" Wait.. what's an "Orpnan"?
It's time for review, kiddo!
TheEpicOne (2013-07-09 02:52:11)can i be in it.. my name is Jewls im 20 has the ability over water fire eath and air has the mental and physcial ability to kill people with her mind she is very dangers very leathal with her mind she can fly levatate she has the ability to go invisible anytime she wants shes a great friend to have but a terrible enemy to have sign me up please so she techinally has anhy power in the universe including power over humans plants and animals.
Philly Fan for Life, Gamer For Life, Hunter for Life, Football for Life, Athlete for Life.
TheEpicOne (2013-07-09 02:54:35)oh and shes indrustrutable -oops wrong spelling- but shes really a angel in her form sent down to live a normal life as a human her only weakness is heartbreak by her true love...cheesy right?
Philly Fan for Life, Gamer For Life, Hunter for Life, Football for Life, Athlete for Life.
spadeguy (2013-07-09 03:04:08)Well, she's gonna have a major "power cripple". But sure!
I should probably write a new story... but will I finish it?
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
TheEpicOne (2013-07-09 03:19:23)noooo.....heyyyyyy @MeNobody13
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spadeguy (2013-07-09 04:39:20)Aaron walked towards the bar. He had been in the dark-market, a place just as bad as it sounds, for a long time. He opened the dark wooden door, and slammed it shut behind him. The rough metal outline made a loud noise, loud enough to cease all activity in the bar. He didn't really care about starting trouble, but he didn't want "it" to happen again. He couldn't risk being caught and branded a Tracer, the name given to all people with PK. PK is a gene passed down throughout generations. It's strength is random, and allows Tracers to do special things, usually specific to each family. Aaron hadn't ever really understood his, he did several things uncontrollably at times. He tried controlling it and that only ended with-
"Aye! You gonna stand there all day?" The bartender asked.
The people in the bar stood up one by one, preparing for a fight.
"Huh?" Aaron replied, "Nope. Hey you guys know where to find this guy named 'the Supplyer'?"
This seemed to draw a reaction. The bartender reached under the counter.
Oh god why... uhh... I know! Aaron thought to himself. Aaron ran forwards and took a chair. Bar patrons began running towards him. He smashed the wooden chair on the closest ones' head, then kicked another in the balls. It was then that they started laughing. They parted for the bartender.
"Heheheh...Aye! Oye can tell ya where he is. Let's see if ya can make me.."
The bartender suddenly pulled out a laser rifle. He aimed, and Aaron ran towards a table. Aaron jumped off of the table, just as the bartender shot, and landed roughly 5 feet away. He ran towards the bartender, and took a shot to the chest. He fell down.
"Oye guess not." He said. The bartender turned around and walked towards the counter when suddenly a glass drops behind him. He turns to see all bar patrons unconscious, and Aaron smiling widely.
"That was awfully lame!" He said, "I guess you're the last one!" He ran toward the bartender. The bartender shot sporadically, and Aaron dodged the few that came close to hitting him.
No! Not now!
Aaron palmed the bartender in the stomach. The bartender flew into the wall. Aaron sped forwards and picked up the bartender. He looked directly into his eyes.
"Oh! That's where he is!" Aaron said.
"WHAT ARE YOU!?!" The bartender managed to say.
"Me? Well I guess I'm a pirate!"
Aarin said, ad he walked away. He exited the door.
The Supplier lives in the city eh? I hate the tech there... it's gonna make this a bit harder.
He walked towards the dense forest and started running. He vaulted over fallen trees and jumped large gaps. At some point he almost failed. He noticed the ground change from dirt to a white metal alloy. "Oh well" he said to himself'Here goes nothing..."
I should probably write a new story... but will I finish it?
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
spadeguy (2013-07-09 18:50:01)Several hours later, Aaron found himself a large skyscraper. He hated the places owned by the World Government. He heard stories from long time ago about how governments were seperate, but one man united them all after the discovery of the Tracers. That forced the entire world to collaborate in effort to get them to leave, although they were already a peaceful community.
He entered an elevator and selected the top floor.
Okay, now the wait. Let's just hope he's frien-
His train of thought was interrupted by a loud bang. The elevator stopped.
Aaron broke the top emergency exit then pulled out a small cube. He threw it at the ground and soon it emitted a column of light. He jumped into the column and ascended into the air. After reaching the top, he closed his eyes.
Okay... please please work
Aaron put his legs on the wall behind him, and crouched. His eyes began glowing, and he sprang off of the wall, bursting through the elevator exit.
Aaron flew into an empty room, and noticed something different. The place was uneasily quiet... then he heard it.
*BOOM*
A man flew into the room, crashing into a wall.
"They're... here..."
Aaron knew the problem.
Tracers
Aaron ran from the room, and down the battered corridor. He approached a large room,brightly lit, and it 2 people stood.
The first was a large muscular man, holding a club. Next to him was a young woman putting a black cube into her pocket. She looked uo towards Aaron and pulled two swords out.
Aaron: WAIT! I don't want problems. I don't even work here! I'm just looking for the Supplier.
The man laughs then hurls his club at Aaron, who dives out of the way. Aaron breaks a pipe out a hole in the wall, then runs toward the man, as a new club materializes in his hand.
Ooh! Must be from Matts
Aaron thought.
The man threw the second club at Aaron, only this club began glowing. Aaron slid under it, but it exploded behind him. He was flung towards the girl, who swung one of her swords. Aaron clapped, stopping the blade and his movement in midair. He fell directly in front of the girl. The man rushed him, and swung him by his leg, before throwing him towards the window. In mid-air, Aaron's eyes began glowing.
YES! I'm doing it!
Aaron swung both arms downward, and all forward momentum halted as he broke through the floor.
Girl: Well looks like he's done for. We can't let him have it.
She pulled the black cube out of her pocket."
Aaron jumped into the air again, this time through the hole he made in the floor. His momentum slowed and he landed on the floor silently. As the two foes were talking, Aaron picked up a chair. He threw it with all his force at the large man, causing him to fly out of the window. The girl threw her sword at Aaron, who moved to his left and caught the handle.
"Let's go!" The girl said, running at him.
"Lets not!" Aaron said, hurling the sword back at her.
The sword caught her sleeve and she was sent backwards as it lunged into a wall. Aaron walked up slowly.
Aaron: Hmm... a black cube... whatever.
Aaron said as he threw it out of the window.
Girl: "THE SUPPLIER!"
Aaron thought for a second. Then he smiled and freed the girl from the wall.
Aaron: You're pretty good! Who was that guy?
Girl:I have no idea. He's a different member of our group of bandits.
This made Aaron pause.
You're a pirate now okay? I'm the capitan.
I should probably write a new story... but will I finish it?
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
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Exactly 5000 years after the age of modern day, a new planet was found. Upon landing it was stated that intelligent life-forms weren't there. However there were entire continents with buildings and cities, being taken back by nature. Aaron is our main protagonist. Born an average orpnan, he lacks knowledge of his potential. In him flows the blood of a Leader...
I'll explain more in a sign-up thread. I need more stuff to work with.
Anyway, I'm Aaron
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