Dragnet (2012-02-23 02:26:48)

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Good for you for having screenshots, but you need subtitles for each section (Graphics, Gameplay, etc.). And you might want to provide links to the full-sized images. Other than that, it could use a bit more length, but it's fine overall.

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Ron1212 (2012-02-23 06:10:14)

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pikarceus (2012-02-23 21:37:34)

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Fix your grammar, resize those screenshots and try to give better reasons. Why are the graphics good? Is it the textures, the character models, what? Try to focus on more than just the 3D.
I also wouldn't recommend scoring each individual section, just give the game one final score.
Also, there is no such think as an 8.8 rating.
You do it in intervals of .25.
Ex: 9, 9.25, 9.5, 9.75, 10

A good try though.

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pikarceus (2012-02-24 02:33:25)

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Wow, much better. Just find a more relevant category than other.

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pikarceus (2012-02-24 02:34:10)

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Seriously, this is pretty good for your first review.

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Doreee (2012-02-24 05:12:14)

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Wow. Not the best review, it could have more details and could be longer, but this was a great shot.

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pikarceus (2012-02-24 21:44:14)

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Just resize the pictures. Keep in mind most of us are viewing this on 3DS.
I would recommend 320x240.

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Ash (2012-02-24 23:51:54)

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Wanna be Newsposter.

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Ash (2012-02-25 03:27:40)

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Tinypic.com @Starman

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pikarceus (2012-02-25 14:11:51)

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You can do it on 3DS.

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pikarceus (2012-02-25 16:02:30)

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Pretty good.

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