FluffehSummer (2015-03-31 08:38:27)

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This is a remake of my old story, with better grammar!
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Taylor was walking to her friend's house. She had found a small black dog, named death. She assumed the dog used to belong to some goth kid or something...

She arrived at her friend's house,knocking on the door.
Dawn greeted her with a smile.
"Oh what a cute puppy!" she giggled "What's its name?"
"Death." she looked a bit scared for a second... "Oh. Well its still a cute dog" Taylor goes inside with Dawn and the puppy. "So Dawn, can i stay the night? i brought clothes and stuff for school tomorrow. "I guess" Dawn answered. "Well its late so we should go to bed." Taylor changes into Pj's and sleeps on the couch. Around 1 am, Taylor is woken up by a loud barking and a scream from upstairs...."Oh no!" she thinks the parents found out there was a dog in the house and were started by it, so she goes back to bed.

The next day,Taylor wakes up around 11:35 "Oh no im late for school!" She thinks, "Why didn't dawn's parents wake me?"
She wandered upstairs and into Dawn's parents bedroom.

She was shocked....
The blankets were torn,blood was spattered in many places...and the parents bodies were on the floor,deep bite marks all over them...the mother's intestines were strown about the floor.... With that, Taylor threw up....she looks in dawn's room and finds her unharmed,but bloody,from the dog sitting on her bed. Taylor wakes dawn and tells her what happened. Dawn stares at the bloody dog and grabs it by the scruff. They, together march to the dumpster, throwing the dog inside "the garbage gets picked up today." Dawn says. she then calls the police.

The police arrive, plucking the dog from the garbage, and taking it to a vet to be put down.

Meanwhile the parents are taken to a morgue...

Taylor invites Dawn to live with her and the live happily ever after
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Meh. This was crappy i know, bjt still better than the original

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