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On the Highway to Church (Arc 1)
Started by LaughingJill
(2014-07-22 04:42:29)
LaughingJill (2014-07-22 04:42:29)
Even though buildings should be avoided by all means, that wasn't followed up by scavengers and people who felt inclined to the things people left behind.

It only was night, not like the things that go bump would catch you.

A door, seen as chained and borded, was sitting blissfully against it's frame.

It... Dented... Inwards a bit. Someone was kicking it in an attempt to open the thing. The second completely broke the doors off the hinges and a combat boot retreated back until a form ran through.

Behind this form was two other people. The first one aimed his gun around, a rather large shotgun with two blades on either side of the barrel. As far as anyone could tell, the figure was cloaked in an overcoat and the face concealed behind an Eyeless Jack looking mask.

One of the others seemed to like dressing up as Laughing Jill, blouse, corset, skirt and even hair. In her hands was a metal lined Cricket Bat and a pistol to her side.

Finally, the last one seemed to be a normal boy, blue hoodie, grey sweatpants and sneakers. His hair was barely visible under the hood and his brown eyes shot around.

"Spade!" Said the girl, the boy looked at the Laughing Jill imposter and barely caught a cold steel axe with letters engraved on the side of the blade.

"What do you expect me to do with this Jill? We got a horde of them coming and I'm pretty sure Rake is in there somewhere!" He replied to the now named Jill.

"Spade, keep it together." Said the other. He pulled off the mask to reveal black messy spiky hair and blue eyes. "We need to keep calm."

"Silon, how much ammo you got?" Jill asked. The boy checked the gun and then a small satchel on his side. "Damn, not enough."

"That's great!" Spade shouted sarcastically, "How are we even going to take care of Rake? What about those half rotted puss bags that are following him?"

Jill momentarily took Spade's axe and walked to the borded up window, after a few minutes, moonlight poured into the room. A few flashes came from a building across from them.

"Hey Silon," Spade said, the kid looked at him with a puzzled look, "I think your sister looks hot in the moonlight."

"Dude, not gonna get you anywhere." Silon replaced his mask and stared down the hallway where he could hear screams and moans.

"Might as well get it out because I don't see how we'll survive this." Spade caught the axe again when it was tossed to him and faced down the hall with Jill.

A fleshy figure turned the corner a ways down, its eyed glowed with an eerie green hue. It was like a human, except lanky and almost twisted into horrid shapes. Long nail like claws drug across the floor as it tilted its head upon seeing the three.

They then backed away slowly and the figure picked up the pace of its walking.

"Come here Rake," Silon started, "Not gonna shoot you in the face, trust me." The creature gave a hoot, or something like it, and proceeded to bend down and crawl on all fours.

The hall was long, but Rake started to cover the ground quite well.

It wasn't new to them. They could survive it. They stood their ground and challenged Rake.

As it entered the room it made a leap at Silon, and the next noise came from a large Caliber gun.

Before they knew it, Rake was thrown back and crashed into the furniture of the room.

"Holy f-" He stopped himself and laghed, taunting Rake, "Allie! I love ya!"

"Calm down Spade," Silon said, "Rake won't stay that way for long. Trust me, Creepypastas don't die." He then stole a quick glance at Rake before heading out the window and climbing on the side of the building.

Jill walked to it and offered Spade the window, Spade scoffed and shook his head, "First, I don't climb and ever heard of Ladies first?"

Jill this time gave a scoff, "Climb. And I'm not giving you a chance to look up my skirt."

"Jeez Jill," Spade held up his hands dismisivly and did as Silon did, "I'm not going to try anything with you."

"I believe that!" Jill said sarcastically, "Hurry up, we need to get to... Church... before Rob and Luigi get pissed again."
XAmbassadors (2014-07-22 14:48:39)
MAKE MORE +1
Bird is the word!

LaughingJill (2014-07-23 19:01:16)
^You should know I don't like it when people say that. So you don't get to be in the next part, or any parts, or the entire story at all.
spadeguy (2014-07-26 02:21:40)
This is good!
I should probably write a new story... but will I finish it?
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
LaughingJill (2014-07-26 23:17:34)
Second part will most likely go up tonight or tomorrow. I haven't been to inspired and people are seriously demanding on another website I write on, so expect it then.
 

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