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ConnorRonnoc (2013-07-22 07:03:29)Hamen Chiz Samlish
Ham 'N' Cheese Samwidge
I know I spelt Sandwich wrong, but I wrote it in an accent, if you know what I mean.
bite za dusto
simmonsa1851 (2013-07-22 11:49:17)Credit to the people who commented on my story suggestions forum, who said I could make it about anything
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MeNobody14 (2013-07-22 12:20:29)This reminds of the story "I hate meat."
It's time for review, kiddo!
ConnorRonnoc (2013-07-22 15:16:16)Spelling= AMAZING!
Grammar= AMAZING!
My understanding of it= AMAZING!
Overall total= 10/10= AMAZING!
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spadeguy (2013-07-26 00:50:26)*crying* congratulations...
I should probably write a new story... but will I finish it?
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
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I was a young man when it happened. I was lying in my blanket made of thin paper towel, for my home was very cold. I couldn't afford a better home because I had no money. My name is Hamen Chiz Samlish, and I was eaten alive.
The food was running out, and soon I would rot and die. I would be alone and soon end up where all the other survivors went, The Tolent. It was a horrible ocean with murky water. It was the most disgusting thing I've ever seen. All my friends went there.
I couldn't escape, for I had no arms or legs. I soon had to die, or I would slowly decay in a very painful way. I was thinking of ideas to get out, when suddenly, a giant came and dragged me away from my home. He lifted me up and slowly chewed me up. I was hopeless. After an hour, I was banished to the Tolent. It was horrible. The last words I heard were, "Man, that was the best sandwich I've ever eaten!"