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spadeguy (2013-07-27 04:04:26)Whatever do you mean?
I should probably write a new story... but will I finish it?
Anyway, I'm Aaron
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Anyway, I'm Aaron
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spadeguy (2013-07-27 04:05:13)(
I should probably write a new story... but will I finish it?
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
spadeguy (2013-07-27 13:17:42)I definitely have to go back to Hyrule. Just not with Maria
Also, Mushroom Kingdom is planned after this, since you asked nicely.
I should probably write a new story... but will I finish it?
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
spadeguy (2013-07-27 14:55:57)Weapons training is odd. I got this weird palm that seems to fire a human version of Aurum technology. In other words, it fires green pulses REALLY REALLY fast. I can charge it up too. Suddenly two angels burst forth through the door. Wait... there was no door there... the door disappeared, as I fell back hopelessly. It looked like twins at first, while it was then revealed that it was Pit and... Pitto- I mean "Dark Pit." They paused in front of me, then looked at my arm frazzled.
Pit:A-Aar-aaaar
Dark Pit: It's A-A-R-O-M Pit.
Me: I'm Aaron!
"WHOAH!" They said in unison as I propelled myself up with my hands. The palm, mixed with my natural tattoo was a good look. I knew I'd give it back in the end though. It was somewhat uneasy knowing where it came from, even without the actual Aurum origins within it.
"Follow us!" They said, leaving the training area. I ran behind them as both of their wings lifted them off of the ground. I broke into a sprint in order to catch up when suddenly a voice echoed
Need some help Aaron? Here!
I was suddenly lifted off of my feet, even without wings. I blew past them into Palutenas hall and suddenly I hit the ground... but I didn't stop there. I hit the smooth ground like a skipping stone and ended up flying into a large column where I was knocked unconscious.
I awoke at a later time on top of a pedestal. Palutena began talking to me
"Oh great! You're awake... finally. Well match is starting, bye!"
THAT'S IT!?!
I slowly descended onto a rough ground. It was HOT! I ran forwards and saw a large pool of lava! Nearby on the other side I could barely make out the opposing warriors. They were the black team... (can I say that?)
Anywho! I stumbled backwards and got caught by something...
Maria!
"Watch your step captain! We kindq need you here."
"Yeah Aaron! That Aurum palm of yours is powered up because of your tattoo." Ryan said, revealing himself.
"Thanks guys! You ready? I'm not sure if they ar-"
I was cut off by Palutenas voice
They'd better be! It's time for the match to begin! START!
I looked back at Maria and Ryan to get a good look at their weapons. Maria had a Meteor Bow, and Ryan had a Samurai Blade.
"Ryan, go left, Maria stay here!"
I ordered. They nodded, and Maria shot once sending a large pulse of energy that curved at a 90 degree angle nailing an opposing warrior in the face. They fell backwards, and quickly got up. I took some steps back then ran forwards and jumped a large gap over the lava, landing with a nice roll, and then looked for an opponent. I found one too. Sprinting forwards, I slid with a "matrix" backbend, narrowly avoiding a large Black Club. Another strike was aimed, but I gut punched the opponent, then struck their helmet. They dropped the club, and pulled out a handle, then a Burst Blade revealed itself. He swung and I reflexively jumped backwards. The warrior leaped forwards, and I backflip kicked the blade out of his hand. He tackled me down, and reached for his Black Club, getting a firm grasp upon it. He swung it, but I placed my hand on his chest and fired, blasting him feet away and into the lava. I got up, and saw Ryan running towards me.
Why though?
A warrior with two floating gun contraptions following him reared the corner, but was met with a swift forward slice by Ryan. He stepped back injured, and then a streak of energy bolted past Ryan and I, hitting the warrior directly in the chest. He fell back unconscious. We looked back to see a happy Maria wave at us, only to be knocked out by a quick burst of blue light. I ran towards the surface of the volcano, with Ryan following. I turn at him for one second, then turn back. and hear a shout as he's KO'd by a warrior with Beam Claws.
FINAL TWO WARRIORS!
I held my palm forwards and shot, but he teleported to the left, barely evading it...
"WHAT?"
Sorry Aaron, you have to have some form of godly blood in your veins in order to use those powers.
I collapsed to my knees as this warrior teleported around me at lightning fast speed. I couldn't land a hit. I held my arm out, but was slashed across the back. I felt the consciousness drain from me, but I couldn't lose... I couldn't. I stood up, and saw the warrior standing near the edge of the volcano near lava. I charged and tried for a tackle, but he teleported to the side. I turned it into a spiral kick, and he fell backwards. I anticipated lava, but was instead met with hot rock ground. I slammed against the ground, along with the warrior, whos helmet fell off to reveal... light Pit? It appeared to be Pit, only with pale white skin, and glowing green eyes. It was an Aurum version of Pit... with Godlike blood... and mad skills.
I'm screwed.
I ran towards a familiar area and saw a black club lying on the ground. Aurum Pit slashed my back, then slashed 4 more times...
"I- I won't lose"
2013-07-27 22:47:19
I should probably write a new story... but will I finish it?
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
spadeguy (2013-07-27 15:47:49)Thanks! I'm glad you like it... I'm not sure you did mention it though.
2013-07-27 22:50:01
I should probably write a new story... but will I finish it?
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
spadeguy (2013-07-27 15:55:18)So I'm thinking of combining the Mushroom Kingdom with Kirbys Dreamland. Maybe even a fight between the two. I however have no background information on Kirby whatsoever...
I should probably write a new story... but will I finish it?
Anyway, I'm Aaron
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Anyway, I'm Aaron
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spadeguy (2013-07-28 08:06:48)Uh-huh. Well it's nice either way... maybe just Mushroom Kingdom.
I should probably write a new story... but will I finish it?
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
Anyway, I'm Aaron
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MeNobody14 (2013-07-28 13:07:21)You misspelled "Kind" in the last part.
And is it just me, or is palutena toying with them?
It's time for review, kiddo!
spadeguy (2013-07-29 01:44:46)Well not many things get proofread. I'm using my 3DS keyboard, so when I type a lot of words it happens...
I should probably write a new story... but will I finish it?
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
spadeguy (2013-07-29 05:13:32)Thanks for the support. Sorry 'bout the lack of story today/yesterday. I went to a nice Oceanside place for just about 12 hours...
I should probably write a new story... but will I finish it?
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
Anyway, I'm Aaron
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spadeguy (2013-07-29 16:44:15)Ooh, I'm honored!
I should probably write a new story... but will I finish it?
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
spadeguy (2013-07-30 16:58:39)I layed semi-unconscious. The Aurum Pit went for another slash, but was met by a large bolt of energy, then is launched back into a wall made by the rim of the volcano. I made my way to my feet, then stumbled into the wall. The Aurum Pit got up, and ran at me and swung. I fought the pain and swiftly dodged all the attacks, then launched a 3 piece combo of my own. Back and forth we began trading blows, and I flew back near the unconscious warrior with a black club.
I felt a sharp pain in my chest, and looked up to see the Aurum Pit firing a beam of energy at me. I couldn't just let this happen, but by now my energy was fading and I was relying on pure willpower. The Aurum Pit closed in on me and charged a shot, but I shot at his chest. I then sweeper kicked him, but he tried doing a chinese get up. I slammed my fist downward as he did and hit his chest, sending him right back down. A loud noise indicated the amount of force held within my next charge shot, which shot a hole through his chest, then I sent a flurry of energy bolts at the beast, leaving a large cloud of dust. It got onto its knees, then grabbed my wrist just as the dust cleared, then charged an attack. I shot another blast and its grip was crippled, then I broke free. Putting a hand on his head, I frontflip-cartwheeled over him and grabbed the black club. I struggled to lift it, but I then underhand swing launching my foe into the air. Next I side swing just as he lands and send him into the wall, and he bounces back. One more overhand swing seals the deal, and the Aurum tech robot is completely crushed. I staggered back and fell, almost landing in the lava, but a light envelopes me and I float upwards. I'm unconscious.
I awaken hours later in a daze, clearly I must have won. I stand up and walk forwards... only to see jail cell walls.
"Don't tell me you don't know why you're here." I hear from a voice behind me "Here's a hint. 'It's not good'."
Don't be so mean Pittoo! Aaron, you're in the Mushroom Kingdom... well what was the Mushroom Kingdom. It's been invaded by a strange enemy. Most of the people there are completely scared witless, and they've all surrendered. I'm not sure why you've been teleported there though. Must have been a mistake. Your weapon is gone, but you now have a new tattoo that I'm sure will be helpful. Drain things you touch of energy, then you can use that drained energy to fire back in the form of several different elements!
"Ah cool! Can you teach me how to use it?"
No, but I can open THAT door!
The door flies open, and Pittoo bursts out, grabbing me along the way. We soar throughout the dungeon, and burst through a door leading to the outside.
The view outside is terrible, as the lovely Mushroom Kingdom is on fire, and bloody. We fly for roughly 5 minutes until we see the battlefield. Before I can get a good look, we're hit by a missle and fall down.
SPLAT!
We land on a Goomba, and it immediately disappears. I stand up and laugh, then turn to see Pittoo lying severely injured. Suddenly a Paratroopa rushes at me, attempting to kill me. I catch the flying shell and then drain it of its life force. I look at Pittoo and place a hand on him, and he recieves the life force as his own!
Awesome!
Gunshots fly by my face, barely missing, and I jump out of the way, going way further than expected. The Mushroom Kingdom really is low gravity!
I land in the bushes with Pittoo following, and we peer out, only to see why this was such a big problem. Walking our way was an enemy I've never expected to see in this place...
2013-07-30 23:59:20
I should probably write a new story... but will I finish it?
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
spadeguy (2013-07-30 19:48:11)The Locusts began firing several rounds into a group of approaching Koopas, but some retreated into their shells blocking the attack. The shelled Koopas suddenly picked up speed and ricocheted all around slightly tilting to steer. A drones head was taken off by the brutish blunt attack. Suddenly another drone tagged a moving Koopa with an ink grenade. The black liquid-gas hybrid spewed throughout the area, and suddenly a large bang was sounded throughout the area.
Pittoo picked me up and we once again began soaring. In the background was a strange sight as a large T-Rex like creature decided to make an appearance. Then a very good surprise happened.
Holy crap that's one big plumber...
A gigantic Mario began fighting the huge Locust soldier. Soon Pittoo landed, and dropped me.
"Aaron! Sorry to say, but Justin told me to tell you about you're next challenge" Pittoo said,
"Please" I responded, "please don't..."
"Yep... so stop the war. I can't help you, but there's a good chance you'll be able to survive. This happens often. Just break into Bowsers castle. It has a secret pulsing stone. After that, you should be able to stab it with this" he handed me a crystal, that began glowing the color of my tattoo, ",then the Locusts should dissolve."
A mortar shell landed relatively close, and Pittoo flew off. Looks like I'd have to do this one alone.
I broke into a sprint and looked down the tall hill I stood on. It had a face and was dancing. It must be alive!
I pressed my palm against it, and then absorbed its life force. It slouched dramatically, and I jumped to the ground. I broke into a sprint in a straight line.
Through desert landscapes.
Through snowy hills.
Over mountains, and under valleys.
Wave after wave of Locust, Goomba, and Koopa.
Through dark caves...
and directly across from the hill I started at.
I entered Bowsers castle. I'll skip the lame details, it was pretty much a done deal. Bowser had already apparently been killed by Mario a long time ago. I barely got to touch the crystal onto this glowing rock, and I was blown away by the force. Like blown out of the castle. Several stories downwards. Then something weird happened. I just landed...
Oh yeah. No fall damage.
I saw several thousand Locust drones collapse, and a helicopter came to retrieve me. I boarded it, and was flown back to the mansion where I fell asleep.
(Sorry for rushing through this part. I'm tired.)
I should probably write a new story... but will I finish it?
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
Anyway, I'm Aaron
THE END
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Palutena has greek origins, not roman.
Juss' saying..