imawsome12 (2013-05-16 10:55:42)

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Is that it?! I THOUGHT THIS WAS OF A CREEPYPASTA BOY! geez.... STOP THROWING ME OFF! It's to good to mess up.

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-16 11:48:22)

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^I don't really do creepy, but the next one will be somewhat frightful.

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-17 04:12:17)

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^I've decided what I want to do. There's gonna be a third, and then the tie in.


And maybe more!


Btw: A 'god-mother' Is a really close friend of the parents, or a friend that was there for the birth. Not I mother that's a god. :l

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kblackeagle (2013-05-17 09:06:50)

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It was cooler. Only reason is that I'm not a fan of love stories. I'm just waiting 'till she meets Jerry's step-dad

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-17 10:40:18)

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^Love story? It's a guy and a girl who feel awkward around eachother..


Besides, the action is coming right now!

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imawsome12 (2013-05-17 12:11:50)

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better be!

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-18 09:48:22)

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"My apologies dear cousin, but this boy is a criminal." Mynor stated. "Criminal?" I asked. I looked at Jerry now, and he seemed calm. "Wanted in the Dream dimension." He said. "So you intend to turn him in?" I asked. "Yes, dear cousin." He smirked as he said "Dear cousin". Ugh.. Being related to a snob was so annoying.

"Go away Minor." I said. He simply laughed at me. "Leave? With the bounty on his head? You must be joking!" He insisted. "No. I'm not." I replied. Mynor started grumbling, and stayed silent for a moment. "Go." I said. He finally decided to leave. Jerry watched him go, and laughed. "Coward." He said under his breath.

I took Jerry inside, and started to fill him in. "I haven't told you everything.." I said. He nodded and stayed quiet. "I was adopted. I'm really from G'nar, the Dream dimension.."

"You see, there's four dimensions. G'nar, the dimension of dreams. J'yne, the dimension of nightmares, Earth, and the twisted reality dimension." I explained. "Soo.. Your from enemy territory?" Jerry joked. He smiled and chuckled as he said it. "Yes. I am. And technically, you are too." I replied. Jerry continued to think. Trying to grasp what this meant. "I feel like we shouldn't be talking to eachother.." He stated. He shook his head, still trying to grasp the situation. "It's alright. I'm not exactly 'friends' with anyone there." I said.

I stood up, done with the conversation. "So when can I meet the woman in the photograph?" I asked. "Now, if you want to." Jerry said. He lead me to the backyard, and into the woods.

After half an hour of walking, we finally reached a mansion. It looked, creepy. But also cool. My curiosity was sparked as we drew closer. Jerry walked up the front steps and opened the door. I, however, stayed at the bottom. Staring in awe at the massive estate. "C'mon Vanessa." He called. She walked up the steps, and followed Jerry.

The interior was rustic, and antique. The furniture was leather, and there was a real fireplace in the living room. Jerry lead me to a staircase, and we descended it into the basement. There were knick-knacks all over the place. Bobbleheads, newspaper clippings, antique dolls, you name it. It was quite spacious, and a spun around twice to look at everything. Everything looked like it belonged in an antique house, except the glowing blue door. Jerry touched the knob and paused, making my anticipation and curiosity grow. He stood for a moment, and then turned the knob. Revealing the inner sanctum that held Rebecka.

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-18 15:05:51)

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Updated.

She was frozen. Not literally. She was frozen in time. She hadn't aged a bit since the date the photograph was taken. Her stance was that of a defiant person. Her face determined, her right arm outstretched, her left arm clutched to her chest. I nearly reached out and touched her, but I was afraid I'd do something wrong.

"I miss the days we spent together.." Jerry said. "She was a second mother to me.." He continued to tell me things about Rebecca. Trying to explain what kind of person she was. "She always acted as a mother, y'know? You get a cut or a bruise, and she becomes 'Docter Mom. PHD'." I laughed at the last bit, and comforted Jerry. "Any way we can unfreeze her?" I asked him. "In all the time I've been here, I haven't found a cure. I've tried everything. Thawing, Burning, Slowing time, etcetera. Nothing has worked." He said. "What about a time machine?" I asked. "Change anything, change everything. We'd completely destroy the time-space continuim." He replied. "Let's go to your dimension. There might be something there that can help.." I suggested. "I've been there before.. But I guess another trip won't hurt." He replied.

When Jerry and I finally made it to the Nightmare dimension, we where exhausted. Portal traveling is tiring, Not pleasant. He lead me to the palace, and showed me around. His room, the throne, the massive pool, everything. He told me to wait as he went to check on something.

Jerry walked down to the guardhouse to check on everything. Everything was normal, except they had a new prisoner. He checked on his mom, and she was fine. She hugged him and he went back to Vanessa.

Vanessa was staring at the ceiling in awe of it. Her mouth was open and she spun around to look at everything. "This is soo cool!" She said. Her voice echoed back, and she giggled. She heard a door open, and turned to see Jerry coming back. "You wanna follow me, or talk to your echoes?" He asked. I smiled, "I'll come along." I said.

I followed him through the palace to the prison cells. He inquired where the "New prisoner" was being kept. One of the guards answered, and told him it was being held in one of the higher security cells. Not good.. I thought. Jerry's face was grim. He looked like he was under a lot of stress. I followed him to the cell.

This side of the prison was much darker and eerie than the other side. "Are you okay?" I asked. He stood there, thinking. He didn't look afraid, nor angry. He looked puzzled as to whom they'd put in such a cell. "These cells are known to drive the inmates insane. Hardly anyone survives. And those that come out, aren't the same as when they enter." He said. He stood, silent for a moment. Then his face turned to grim determination as he opened the cell.

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-19 14:33:42)

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That's what I was thinking as I posted it. @TheMarioBeast

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-20 03:53:45)

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The cell's interior was bleak. Ancient bloodstains covered the walls and floor. Shackles and manacles were lying around in various spaces, and a few bones were here and there. The prisoner, was chained to the wall, judging by it's long hair, I guessed it was a girl. Her clothes were torn, her arms had scars on them, and her legs were so weak she could barely stand. She yanked and pulled at the chains, desperately trying to escape. She grew balls of blue fire in her hands, and tried to melt the chains, but that failed. I watched in horror and pity at the poor creature chained in here. Jerry seemed to recognize her. "Angela? Is that really you?" He asked. She stopped pulling and froze. She brushed the hair out of her face and looked at Jerry, with a mix of fear and anger. "Get me out of here!" She screamed and threw a ball of fire at him. I cringed as it connected with his face, but it simply dissolved into a puff of smoke. "Why'd you come here?" He asked her. He looked angry now, and I backed toward the door, unsure of what he'd do. "I came to see you, you dolt!" She threw another ball at him, and it dissolved, just like the last one. "What happened to you?" He said. She growled at him, and tried to grab him. "Your idiot guards! That's what!" She said. She continued trying to lunge at him, but her chains did not permit it' "Explain what they did to you." He said. "They nearly killed me! That's what! They threw me into some tub full of black water, and next thing I know, I'm in here! Now GET ME OUT!" She yelled. He tried to calm her, but she didn't respond. She simply yelled at him and tried to break the chains. I was about to see if I could help, but she suddenly broke her chains. I yelped and jumped back as she tackled Jerry. Her fingers became claws, and she tried to rip Jerry apart. He burst into flames, and fought back. I ran out of the cell and slammed the door. The door, however, exploded and slammed into me. I groaned and lost concousness, just as a blue fire ball shot out of the chamber.

Angela had burst into flames, just as Jerry had. She jumped away from him and became more composed. She laughed, and watched as Jerry tried to tackle her. She sidestepped his attack and he lost his balance and fell to the floor. "My little pet. Trying so hard to defeat the master!" She said. She lunged at him, and held his throat. She shoved him up against the wall and laughed maniacally as he tried to escape. "My little pet didn't save me." She purred. "Who will save him?" She knocked him unconscious and took off with him.

I awoke in the infirmary. Surrounded by blinding white lights.

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-20 09:55:50)

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I got out of bed, and walked around the infirmary. Mangled, unconscious bodies lay in the various beds. I made my way out of the infirmary and into the lobby, looking for Jerry.

Jerry awoke in a dark room. He tried to get up, but he was chained to a bed. Just like ol' times.. He thought. Angela was off to the side, studying something. She was dressed in a blue dress, She had a glowing blue crown as well. "Nostalgia." Jerry said. "Ahh, my little pet is awake." Angela said as she turned around. "Wanna let me go?" He asked. He pulled on the chains to emphasise his request. "No. My little pet didn't release me. So, I will return the favor."

She got on top of me, and slowly ran her fingers through my hair. "My little pet isn't fighting back! Has he learned to obey?" She purred. She ran her hands along his body, and he couldn't help shuddering. "What do you want with me?" He asked her. Impatiently awaiting an answer. "I loved you.. And you didn't save me.." She smiled eerily, and continued caressing him. "I want you to love me." She said. "That's hard when your not treating me nicely." Jerry said. "Too bad. I don't trust you enough to let you go, yet."

Vanessa wandered through the halls and stumbled across the servants rooms. "Anyone here?" I called, but nobody answered. I walked through it and found only one person. "Can you direct me to Jerry?" I asked. The servant looked up at me, shrugged, and went back to work. I wandered through the palace for forever, until I ran into Mynor. "What're you doing here?" I asked him. He whirled around, startled, and then laughed. "Looking for the bounty." He said. "You and me both.. 'cept I'm helping, not hindering." I retorted. He glared at me, and went about his business. I walked down a narrow hallway, and was pulled into a room. I was about to scream when somebody clamped a hand over my mouth. "Dude.. Why do I have to hold her?" The boy holding me asked. "Because, your younger." A girl said. Vanessa tried to get away, but the boy held her tighter. "If you promise not to scream and stay here, I'll let go." He said. I nodded my head vigorously, in hopes that he would actually let me go. He let go, and I screamed. This time, a stronger pair of hands gripped me and clamped my mouth shut. "Mmph!" I groaned. "Shut up! We're trying to help you!" The girl hissed. I tried to get a good look at their faces, but it was too dark. "C'mon sis, why do we need her?" The boy asked. "You'll see.." She said.

Jerry groaned as Angela slapped him. "Stupid little pet!" She said as she slapped him again. The reason why she was so mad, was because Jerry had almost escaped.

Almost..

He had managed to break the chains, but Angela was too quick. He was now chained to the wall. "I was going to release you, but you just had to do it yourself! Impatient little wretch!" This time, she slapped him with a fireball. And yes, it did sting. His face was bruised, his clothes were torn and singed where she had whipped him. "Let me go!" He protested. That earned another slap across the cheek. "No! You will stay with me." Angela said. She walked toward the door. "I'm going to get something that I think you'll like.." She said as she opened it and walked out. He tried breaking the chains around his arms, but that didn't quite work. He started trying to break the ones on his legs, when he noticed something. Angela's eyes had changed. They weren't the normal light blue, they were a darker, more devious looking blue. "Black pool.. What black pool?" He muttered to himself. He continued yanking at the chains on his legs, and finally gave up. It was no use.

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TheEpicOne (2013-05-20 14:19:00)

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0-0'

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-20 14:20:19)

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^Something wrong?

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TheEpicOne (2013-05-20 14:31:23)

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Nahh its just diffrent than the others 83

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-20 14:34:15)

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Sowwy..

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