OmegaZero (2016-12-13 08:20:27)

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On a cold snowy mountain, soul stood atop the peek, searching for the ice crystal. “Hmmm?!” Soul gasped as he saw Dark Omega (A clone of Mega man Zero and Omega Zero) carrying the Ice crystal. Soul glowed as he had a temporary armor. Dark Omega at Soul and laughed very evilly “YOU’RE TOO LATE, X! WE’VE ALREADY STARTED RESSURECTING THE DARK ELF! NOW HAND OVER YOUR ELEMENTAL CRYSTALS!” Soul shook his head no “I don’t want to fight!” Dark Omega pulled out a gun and pointed at a snowy peak “I DAMAND YOU! OR ELSE I’LL SHOOT THE MOUNTAIN AND EVERY CITICEN DOWN THERE DIES!”
Soul snarled as his fist shook “Fine…I’ll fight you!”
Dark Omega smirked “I knew you would-“
“But I won’t fight alone!” “Wha-?” Soul pointed at Dark Omega as a bunch of Wolves ran at Dark Omega, Barking and attacking Him, forcing Dark Omega to drop the crystal. Soul snapped his fingers and the wolves stopped attacking Dark Omega. Soul walked up to Dark Omega “Now, It’s fair!” soul said, calmly Dark Omega smirked “Heh, your move!” Soul got into a fighting pose “Well, I’ll pass.” Dark Omega smirked and ran up to Soul, pulling out his sword getting ready to Attack when Soul used Time Stop followed by Ice Shaver then Tri-Thunder. Dark Omega dropped to the ground, as smoke came out of him. “C-cheater” soul’s armor disappeared as Soul gave a patient smile “That’s why I made you go first. I knew you were going to attack me with those attacks. But now that my temporary body is gone…I guess a deal is a deal” Soul said, picking up the Ice Crystal.
“By the way, Dark Omega, Tell Weil that he can never have Rachel or Alice.” Soul flew off, still holding the Ice Crystal. “Thanks, Dude!” the spirit of the Ice Crystal said, as his Cyber Elf, Glacies, flew out of the Ice Crystal. Soul smiled “I’m only gathering the Crystals just so I can protect the earth”
“From?”
“The Dark Elf”
“Oh, I thought you were saving the work from a series of strange lightning bolts”
Soul Sighed, shaking his head no “No, If I was, I would be flying to Greenland, not to the ruined resistance base, number one. Number two, I would need the Metal, Ground, and Rock Elements, not the Ice Element, Glacio”
“Good Point”
At a small child-friendly bar called ‘toot n’ totem,’ the small team hung out at the bar, because it was Karaoke night. “Don't you feel like you've just lost your way? Oh, we're always watching over you. Dreams are kept in a secret place.” Rachel sang, almost sounding like a guy. Mörkt (The tiny Nightmare dragon) sighed “End me now!” X glared at Mörkt “Do you not have any manners” Clay started singing with Rachel “Burning Rangers! We're goanna make it right Burning Rangers! For this dream of ours we must try-uhh sorry! This song is SO CATCHY!”
“No wonder Rachel’s mom Ships you and Rachel” Splat muttered, as Kid grabbed his staff and smacked Splat’s leg with it “OWCH!”
“Be nice!” Rachel walked up to her friends, a bit exhausted. “Remind! Me! To! Never! Ask! For! SUGGESTIONS! UGH!” Noah looked at Rachel “It was your idea” Splat poked Rachel’s face “and we answered with the cri-I mean ca-“Clay slapped Splat, “KAMI! KAMI! HA!” Splat was shoved onto the floor. Rachel sighed “Well…I’m up after-UGH! SPLAT, YOU SAID MY SINGING WAS CRINGY!” Rachel shouted over a 50 year old man singing Wreaking Ball by Miley Cyrus. Mörkt snarled “That man needs to have his singing licensed revoked” Splat got up, covering his ears. “I agree!”
“Well! You guys are goanna love the next song, It’s so calm. Besides, Mikey Siren is almost done.” Finally the horrid music stopped, and Rachel got back up onto stage again. Suddenly, the lights went out and before anything happened, loud scream, from stage, filled the air. “METTATON, SUMMON SOME LIGHTS SO WE CAN SEE WHAT THE SITUATION IS!” Noah yelled, knowing that the power went out. Mettaton flew to the middle of the room and started glowing. A large wolf-like creature, with eight legs and black wings, stood on top of Rachel, as blood dripped from her arm. “RMJE!” Kid cried. Mörkt glowed turning into a child-sized Nightmare Dragon.
“HEY, EIGHT LEGS, FIGHT ME!” Mörkt taunted as he skipped around on stage. “Splat, your dragon is part wolf spider”
“…Ey, Goku, aren’t you goanna save your girlfriend?”
“I WILL HELP RMJE!” Kid shouted throwing a fire ball at the Wolf Spider. The Wolf Spider glared at kid as it hissed at him. Mörkt bit the Wolf Spider’s tail as a black aura surrounded the Wolf Spider, placing it into a nightmare. “KID, CAN YOU LEVATATE LIVING OBJECTS?!” Mörkt asked. A bystander lift his arm up as the Wolf Spider slowly levitated, Mörkt dragged Rachel out from under the Wolf Spider. Mörkt placed Rachel onto his back and he Ran to the group “We need to take her to the hospital, again!” Mörkt said, sounding worried.
“No…they can’t do anything for a Winged Wolf Spider bite.” Spider said, walking out of the crowd.
“I do have the antidote for a Winged Wolf Spider bite though” Kid gasped “R-really?” Spider grabbed his bag and looked at kid and said softly “E pluribus Unum.” Spider knelt down next to Rachel, when Splat asked Spider “What does that mean? Mr. Twisted Fate?”
“First, the name’s Spider, and second of all, you should have figured it out when Rachel said it.” Clay walked up to Noah and asked “Hey, Noah, How did you know that the power was out?” “Well” Noah said “I had no Wi-Fi on my computer so I assumed that the power went out.”
“Well…Uhmm, that’s kind of weird that-“
“Hey, NO AH FENCE! But is the power on or is that still mettavox?” Splat shouted
“Splat, his name is METTATON! And yes, the owner, Mr. Larios, just texted me while Spider was helping Kid.” Splat looked up at the ceiling and said “Man, I wish this author was more specific!”
HEY, SPLAT, BREAK THE FOURTH WALL AGAIN AND I WILL REPLACE YOU WITH ANOTHER OC!
“Please don’t!”
THEN STOP BREAKING THE FOURTH WALL!
(ewe) “Meep.”
Spider got up and glared at Splat, “You and Alea. Well, good news, guys. Rachel will be fine. She’ll need rest. Her wound isn’t too serious. As for the poison, keep her away from volcanos.” Clay gasps, like an anime person. “WHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTT?!” Spider chuckled “I’m just joking. But still, I recommend someone either taking Rachel home, or keeping them at their place.” Kid raised his hand “I’ll take RMJE to my place.” Splat snickered “And what? H-“Everyone else agreed with Kid. Spider smiled “Okay, I’ll help you then, I need to go back to my ‘shift’ Or else the commander will have my jacket.” Spider carefully picked Rachel up and followed Kid to his Apartment.
Back at the ruined base. Soul looked out into the vast land when Glacies appeared. Soul looked at Glacies and back at the barren land “A desert can be anything, you know, Glacies. From a barren snow bank to a dry and hot sand doom…You know, Glacies…I’m kind of curious about Omega. Does he really miss Weil? After all that reprograming that the Darkness Hunters have done to him? Can good guys really be the Bad guys? I have so many questions and yet…none of them have been answered.”
“soul, Believe in yourself? Do you miss the Maverick Hunters as much as Omega misses Weil? Or do you miss Z-“Soul turned around and interrupted Glacies with a booming voice “DON’T TALK ABOUT HIM OR THEM LIKE THAT!” Glacies fluttered back a bit feeling a bit bad for herself. Soul looked down and sighed “Sorry, I just snap when I hear those names.” Soul walked off whispering softly “no matter how many times I say it, it’s worthless.” Soul walked out the door that automatically closed behind him. Glacies stared at the door, having a very sorrowful emotion deep in her heart. “I didn’t mean it like that, Soul.”

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2016-12-13 19:19:17

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Dreamer (2016-12-13 08:33:01)

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... Wot?

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Dorklard (2016-12-13 20:39:33)

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Another trash story, 0/10. Many Grammar errors " EVERY CITICEN" same. No pacing, attempt at a 4th wall joke. More Undercancer. Now lets just list all of the spelling errors i can see at a glance; EVERY CITICEN. “…Ey, Goku, aren’t you goanna save your girlfriend?” (This isn't DBZ fam) Now from what i can see from just reading what little i have, This story is more cliche than your average harem anime. Someone stole the elemental crystals, Blah Blah Blah, Dark Elves, Blah Blah Blah, And Undercancer. its time to stop.

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OmegaZero (2016-12-13 22:04:55)

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Thanks for your opinion! I'll keep that in mind! Thank you for your opinion!

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Dorklard (2016-12-13 22:34:06)

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It wasn't an opinion, It was criticism. Criticism you should take to heart. If i was you i would try and re-write my story board, Pace the story, Give proper character introduction, Add in the rising conflict of the story at a nice pace, while still making sense. Work on grammar errors, And spell check before i post it. That is what i would do.

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OmegaZero (2016-12-14 03:10:07)

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Still, I do spell check. Some mispellations are intanenol. plus, you got to rememmber that I'm not perfect. not everything is perfect!

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Perfect_Chaos (2016-12-14 04:49:47)

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"And opinion"

"Mispellations"

"Inteanenol"

No one on thsi thraed can spell

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Dorklard (2016-12-14 18:08:00)

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Yeah i know. grammar is dying art dad.

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NintendoDude (2016-12-17 02:12:42)

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What is this garbage?

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OmegaZero (2016-12-21 10:08:37)

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Currently working on Singa 5. Good news is that I WILL NOT INCLUDE ANY OF THE TINY PARTNERS! Also, I'll be replacing Noah's character with Saitama (even though I don't know anything about One punch man.) And for those who are wondering if undyne and Mettaton will come back, They will! speaking of tiny partners, I am also including some more kids (and an adult) These kids will be:
Lorenzo and his tiny partner Wolvern (I made the name up) the Lucario (With the color scheme of Wolverene)
Aaron and his tiny partner Lavaman (Lavaman is a Minecraft dude with fire powers)
SkulLady and her tiny partner Skull man.EXE
Deven and his tiny partner Sonic(?) (I'll need to ask Deven about his partner)
Summer and her partner Felica (from Darkstalkers)
and finally Gorge and his tiny partner Ironman (*facepalm while laughing* I swear!!! He loves Ironman and I'm not a marvel nerd!)
So, thank you for reading this update! Also, quick warning, If I misspell a name (Like Mettaton or Undyne) I'm using a new spellcheck software because people nag on my spelling

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Dorklard (2016-12-22 00:56:05)

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"I'll be replacing Noah's character with Saitama (even though I don't know anything about One punch man.)" Sweet jesus, If you don't know anything about the show why bother including him? Now then allow me to say this; These stories are , They are a cluster of multiple franchises. The plot is as generic as it gets, Barely anything original about it. Now lets just count how many franchises are ripped off and put into one storm; OPM, Undercancer, Minecraft, Sonic, Darkstalkers, Marvel/Ironman, And Pokemon. This is very well might be the tiest story every created. Period.

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NintendoDude (2016-12-23 06:53:06)

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This is what vaccines do to you as a baby.

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OmegaZero (2016-12-23 12:50:57)

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Well, I appreciate the nice and warm comments. NOT! well, guess what? No more presents for you guys! I have other people who like these stories. I worked so hard on this story and what do I get? Harsh and comments. wow. you guys ARE really mean! whatever! I'm done with you guys! So, Enjoy this LAST episode because you'll NEVER KNOW if the world gets saved or not. Also, I guess I'll bite my own bloody lip because I'm keeping mettaton!

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