Popstar20 (2016-08-11 09:05:07)

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Welcome to a world that's not quite as it seems.
This world is corrupted by haunting dreams.
Where darkness is all you see.
You try to run but, you can't flee.
For it's impossible to escape and be free.
Then suddenly, you just can't believe your eyes.
Pay attention carefully, you'll hear the demons as they lie.
They don't want you alive, they want you to die.
You can run, you can hide but, there is no way you can survive.
Take a look at them, don't you see the death in their eyes?
If you try to escape this wretched place, these monsters will make a mask out of your face.
You blood will be shed all over the floor.
Just because you've tried to open the locked door.
Now you're with them, trapped here, watching the next victim get his heart torn out of his chest.
Hide his soul, it's the only thing left.

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SlenderDude12 (2017-10-29 23:32:57)

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This is too dark. Get the KKK.

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Carmilla (2017-11-09 16:58:39)

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Try free-verse. You're trying too hard with the rhyming and it's sort of cheesy.

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