Gourgeist (2016-02-29 02:12:41)

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"Come on, smile!"

His voice was eerily cheerful, sickening even—like a happy tune drifting through a funeral home.

His so-called "mint-green" hair covered one eye, the other clearly visible below the shaved side of his head.

That one, strangely pink eye, it couldn't be natural... it was a contact lens—or at least that's what I assumed it was.

The man looked so colourful, joyous, yet also disturbing and... painfully familiar to me.

The way his glittering pink eye looked over me sent chills down my spine. I wasn't fooled by his winged eyelashes, mascara, or his bright green eyeshadow that so happened to match his hair and bowtie.

I am not swayed by his charming speech, his slightly tanned skin, the spiderbite piercings in his lip, his ice cream themed suit, none of it.

You could see it in his face if you looked deep enough, this man... he was not just a sweet ice cream man that had a way with words. This was not someone pure of heart that enjoyed making people happy. No.

He liked to watch them suffer.

(Can't continue this ah... drabble at the moment, text limit and all. If y'all like it I'll finish it another time. Eh. )

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Crush42 (2016-02-29 04:13:23)

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Pro tip: If you're using a 3DS or other device with a character limit, git gud, m8. divide your story into chapters, posting each chapter as a comment continuing the original post. I wrote some like that before I had a computer or smartphone, so if you take the time to check (links are on my profile), maybe you can try to do something like that?

IDK, just trying to help you, m8.

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