lekoni123456789 (2015-12-03 02:08:08)

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there was a lady that worked on portal 2 she never talked.one of her friends killed her and she haunted the game and sombody sold it and mass produced it and everybody who got the game DIED

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epicpwner2003 (2015-12-03 02:43:37)

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This story is absolute .

• incorrect grammar
• no backstory
• cliché idea

Become a better writer before posting some more stories on here, please.

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