AntiChrist (2015-07-23 17:14:56)

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I suck at drawing but I think this would look really cool if I wasn't. I'm really curious what it would look like if someone good at drawing made this.

Edit: the brown thing in the street is stairs going downward into a cave.

Reward: all my 3dsplaza points or something. Idk

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Paige (2015-07-23 21:21:26)

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I think you should clean it up a bit, like erasing the fingerprint (if you can) and coloring it in more to make sure there are no white spots. Everything needs to be a lot darker.
And don't use just one color for a certain parts. (Mix colors!)
I really like the idea of this though.


Lol I'm bad at giving criticism Sorry.
I failed all my essays about criticism for art class...

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AntiChrist (2015-07-24 01:18:00)

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The white spaces full of fingerprints and the places with one solid color were intended to be there. I could make it look neater, but because of my shaky hands and lack of skill, it would take me days. Still, even if I did do it, my picture idea wouldn't have come to life the way it was meant to. That's why I need someone to complete it.

(I don't intend to sell this or anything, so it's not like I'm using anyone)

Edit: forgot to mention, I don't think there's really a wrong way to give constructive criticism. It only has to qualify as constructive and it automatically can't be "incorrect". You're doing fine.

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Nutsy (2015-07-25 14:08:32)

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What kind of colored pencils did you use? If it isn't something Prismacolor tier, you can give up on it looking nice. If you used something like that, you're using them wrong. There's a guide on this very website for colored pencils.

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AntiChrist (2015-07-25 15:41:52)

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@UnitedUdders I have probly about 100 by now.

@Nutsy I don't plan on drawing it on my own.

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little5 (2015-07-26 20:22:44)

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It's not about the utensils, it's making the most out of what you have. DD

Anyways, not sure if you plan on arting, OP, but you should redraw it yourself. Only you know how you want it to turn out, plus it'll be good practice. Try again and again until it comes out perf. I reccomend using black paper to really make the colors pop, and don't scribble when you color. Just switch things up and see how it turns out.

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UnitedUdders (2015-07-26 22:17:47)

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Prismacolor has terrible quality for its price.

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Mephistopheles (2015-07-28 13:24:25)

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@OP
"I just checked Plaza's art forum and if you still go on there, tell AntiChrist that Papa Aleks will come to the rescue"
Your horrible colored pencil use rivals that of PokeCat's. You should be able to to do better even with ones from the dollar store.

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AntiChrist (2015-07-30 02:52:16)

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Agreed. Also, thanks Papa Aleks

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Nutsy (2015-08-01 22:47:15)

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I didn't pay for my Prismas.

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Perfect_Chaos (2015-08-02 01:13:54)

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ayy Aleks

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Aleks (2015-08-08 21:08:15)

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It's been a while and I'm not really gonna do much more with this because other things have my attention, such as 3D modeling, so I'm just gonna leave what I've done with it.

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UnitedUdders (2015-08-12 07:59:58)

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That's not bad but it also isn't too good.

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AntiChrist (2015-08-16 23:04:15)

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@Aleks dude this is amazing. Awesome job! Thank you.

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Elim (2015-08-17 19:15:11)

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This thread is full of bullying holy crap
Are artists giant jerks or what

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