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LightBlu1 (2014-12-01 23:13:30)All of it sounds so good... I don't know what to choose.
Eh, I'll go with unnamed story 1, it somehow appeals to me most.
... k.
PhoenixDawn (2014-12-02 01:21:27)I still like Controller. I have been waiting for the next chapter but damn 1 seems good.
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Jason2k14 (2014-12-02 01:46:53)I haven't read any one of your stories as of now. But as LightBlu1 has posted, it appeals to me the most.
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Nutsy (2014-12-02 11:30:52)If you want to write a new story, go with 1, but it's still a little meh.
AntiChrist (2014-12-03 04:33:42)Any title sugestions for number one if I end up chosing it? The current idea forva title in my mind is "invisible culprit" but part of me thinks it sounds stupid.
What are your thoughts on it and do you guys have any ideas?
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As some of you know, one of my goals in life is to be an author because I love writing. I post stories here as practice. I plan on writing an actual good story for you all to critique here. I have multiple things I am in the process of writing and would like to post one here so I can hear your constructive criticism and learn what I need to do to improve.
Since I don't want to flood this forum with multiple threads, vote on which one of these three you would like me to post.
This one is about a person with multiple personalities. When the "evil" one awakens, he goes out and murders someone then does everything he can to get away with it. Since he is very intelligent and good at manipulating people, this isn't a very difficult task for him.
The "good" personality doesn't even know that he has multiple personalities or even remembers killing anybody. He does know that people he cared about are getting killed though, so he plays detective to find out who is doing these crimes. This person is also very intelligent, but one disadvantage he has is that the other personality knows everything about him and watches while he isn't controlling the body.
The evil personality, knowing the main characters' train of thought very well leaves "clues" that are supposed to make him eventually become suspicious of the wrong person.
The main character of this story isn't all that smart and has this severe problem with spacing out too often for long periods of time. Eventually, he is shoved into a situation where he is forced to pull himself together to protect as many people as he possibly can from not one, but two cults full of people who have magical powers used for their own personal gain. Each cult member believes their motives are justified.
Eventually, the main character is able to develop the same powers, but for some unknown reason, his is very limited and brings him closer to death every time he uses them. He has to depend mostly on his ally's during this story and he resents that a lot.
I can continue this one, which everyone seems to have lost interest in already. This has no main character.
Each member of 3dsplaza becomes a pokemon and lots of people start killing each other with their new powers. Each user struggles to help each other survive in this harsh environment.
Once I figure out which one I will be posting, I'll delete this thread and make a new thread with each chapter of whichever one I end up posting here put in a spoiler.
I am also open to title suggestions for un named stories one and two