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Started by AntiChrist
(2014-10-17 01:07:24)
AntiChrist (2014-10-17 01:07:24)
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Please delete/close the sign up thread. I'm going to use this thread as the sign up thread from now on.



Chapter 1:


A scizor, talonflame,and an areodactyl with a pansear riding on its' back bolted toward the walls. A bunch of phsycic pokemon combined their power to make a forcefield keeping them outside the walls. The top of the wall near the attackers were lined with pokemon in the police force, throwing their strongest attacks at them.

"Damn. Just let us back inside the walls!"

Yelled the talonflame before using ember. Everyones attacks broke apart the ember easily.

"Sorry pal, once you leave the walls, you aren't allowed back in."

Said pheonix before defeating the areodactyl by using leaf storm. The pansear jumped off its back and used match punch on pheonix. The wall of phsycic energy blocked him before he could even get close. This was the fifth time today this same team of pokemon tried to get back inside the walls.

"Aye mate, this just isn't going to work. We have to give up."

Said the Scizor

"What??!"

Said the talon flame as he dodged dozens of attacks.


"We can't fight the entire state. We were stupid to leave instead of just go to jail in the first place. We'll have to find safety somewhere else. Bye. I'm going."


Said the Scizor before he left. The rest followed, finally leaving the walls alone.

"It looks like we're finally done here"

I said. This was the most action we've had in weeks. There just weren't many enemies lately. A few hours later, an elgiem teleported infront of the walls.

"State your name"

Said Lance, the hypno who was always watching the outside from on top of the walls. All of his assistances were pokemon with the ability keen eye, who spotted people around the wall that were approaching and alerted him.

"My name is Clarence, an Elgiem. I came to live here inside the walls. I promise I am peaceful."

Clarence was led to one of the tier two members who assigned jobs.

"Hello, newcommer! Welcome to the state! What brings you here?"

Said Cr1tikal

"Well... There are people after me... and... I sort of need protection."

Said the Elgiem

"Don't worry, I'll report this to our chief and we'll go out and bring those people to justice in no time!"

Said Cr1tikal. The Elgiem didn't seem reassured at all. The whole time he was staring at the floor, looking quite sad.

"You see... It won't be that simple..."

Said Clarence.

"Whaaat?? You're really doubting the power of the state??"

Said Cr1tikal

"It's a large group of people. They even keep hostages in an abandones city way outside the walls somewhere. They have a base and everything. They have yet to be defeated.... "

Said Elgiem. Cr1tikal was shocked. He used his phycic power to see if he was lying. He then asled the Elgiem to give more details. The next day, Cr1tikal reported to Victor the situation. Clearence was summoned to a meeting with Dedenne amd the other tier one members. They agreed to help Clearence as long as he showed them where the hostages were.

The next day, Dedenne came to the police station.

"The reason I have called you here today is because I have a task that requires the help of much more people than usual. Apperantly, there's a group of pokemon with over 40 members that are keeping hostages. Our friend clarence has showed us where they are, and he will lead you there. "

Said Dedenne.

"Here's what we are going to have you do..."

Said Victor


"We are going to have you divided into teams of five. I will give each of you a map showing where you will be positioned. Go there and await further instructions. You will all be given oran berries is the event of an emergency. Lance will be there in case everything gets out if hand. I expect you all to take this mission seriously. This is a large group we are dealing with."

Continued Victor.

"Brandon, Pheonix, Drakkai, Nutsy and Josh, you will be in group A."

Said Dedenne. Group B was Kishy, Dimentia, Jake, and a couple of other pokemon I didn't know. Group C was Cr1tikal, Clearence (he decided to join us) and a couple others.

Group D contained Flux, four other pokemon I didn't know


E had Pokemonbro, Meia and a few others as well.

I noticed each group had ay least one phsycic type and one tier two member.

Later that day, Dedenne asked lance, the Hypno to try and contact Carlos11 and request his help. Lance went on top of the wall an concentrated, using his phycic power to make his voice reach way out miles away from the walls.

"Carlos... Are you there? Can you hear me?"

Thought Lance. He kept trying and waited a few hours. There was no response.


"I guess carlos11 isn't near by.... I wonder where he goes all the time."

He Went back to Dedenne.

"He isn't around. I have no way of contacting him."

Said Lance

"That's fine... I think I might send Victor to help you guys out. Just in case."

Said dedenne.

"This is the first time I've actually seen you worried about an operation, sir."

Said Lance

"It's the fact that the golurk hasn't been seen for a while lately. It bothers me. I have a feeling something is up. Is he planning to attack this place to kill the eevee?"

Said Dedenne, staring out the window of the tower with a very serious expression.

"Hey Dedenne..."

Lance said. Dedenne turned his head towards the hypno.

"Hmm?"

"....What's your real name?"






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2014-10-17 20:33:28

Nutsy (2014-10-17 02:44:00)
I'm in two groups. I must use one hell of a Double Team.
AntiChrist (2014-10-17 12:29:24)
Okay, in group B, just pretend that instead of Nutsy, it says whoever I didn't include

*laziness intensifies*
PhoenixDawn (2014-10-17 13:31:34)
Either my leaf storm is strong or the aerodactyl is weak.

*laziness engage*
AntiChrist you must copy the roster.

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2014-10-17 13:35:31

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AntiChrist (2014-10-17 20:28:54)
The areodactyl had been weakened by other attacks, also you were stronger than it. The second chapter will be posted in about 20 minutes.
AntiChrist (2014-10-17 21:36:58)
Chapter 2:

When the sun rose the next day, the gates opened and all 30 people, groups A-F left the walls and headed off to the abandoned city. Everyones minds were connected to a telepathy link that kept everyone in touch in case something happened.

All six groups were spread out too much for us to see eachother. Lance walked on his own. The entire telepathy link depended on him since he was the source. If he were to be defeated suddenly, the telepathy link would dissapear and nobody would know where anyone was or if they got attacked. This would have bothered me a lot, if it weren't for the fact that Lance was very powerful. He was gifted with a perfect hit point IV, making him difficult to defeat.

It took over three hours to get to the city. Lance told us to wait outside until he was done scouting out the place. He teleported inside, jumping, across rooftops and made sure nobody else was around. He then sent an image into my, groups brains, showing us where everyone was and where we were to go. Everyone in group A followed the instructions amd went down the street we were supposed to. Suddenly, Nutsy heard Lances voice.


"Nutsy, there is a snorlax comming from around the corner ahead of you. He is one of the members of the group we are about to fight against. Hide in the library next to you and make sure he doesn't see you as he comes by. I will tell you when you may come out."

Nutsy led us into the building and we crouched under the windows, peeking outside. We could see a huge snorlax walking by. I could tell he was powerful. When he passed us, I noticed that he was carrying a grenade launcjer between his buttcheeks. Drakkai must have noticed too, because he was trying very hard to hold in his laughter.

"Don't laugh"

Whispered Nutsy

Group B was being led down an underground subway. Kishy heard a noise comming from down the tunnel. A whole bunch of flying type pokemon were comming jer way.

"What is Lance thinking? Shouldn't he have ordered us to go hide somewhere else?"

Said Jake

"All of group B except for Kishy, cover your ears. Now."

Ordered Lance. Kishy looked around.

"Stay put."

Said Lance. Kishy was very hesitant. What the hell was Lance planning to do? Kishy got ready to run away. The pokemon were all getting very close. Kishy stepped back a few feet.

"Wait."

Demanded Lance. Kishy stayed put. She drew her swords. Suddenly, the pokemon were only 100 meters away.

"Now sing."

Said Lance

"What... What the hell... OH!"

Kishy suddenly understood his plan. Since she was a jigglypuff, she could use the move sing which put pokemon to sleep. In the underground tunnel, the enemies would all hear her loud and clear.


"TURN DOWN FOR WHAT!!"

Yelled kishy as loud as she could. All the flying type pokemon stopped. It was silent for a momemt, then they all broke into laughter. A pidgeot, still trying to keep her laughter under control yelled "intruders! Get them!"

Apperantly kishy yelling that line didn't work, so she started awkwardly going "LA LA LA LA LA" Very loudly. All the flying type pokemon fell to the ground. They were all asleep.

Lance teleported into the tunnels, then quietly teleported the flying types some other place one by one.

"Where are you taking all of them?"

Asked Jake.

"The state prison."

Said Lance. It was surprising that he was able to teleport that far away so quickly and still have so much energy.


Meanwhile inside an abandoned factory, the ring leader of the gang holding the hostages, a sandslash was pacing back and forth, staring out the window.

"CARL!"

He yelled. A breloom ran towards him, covored in sweat.

"W-what seems to be the problem, sir?"

He asked.

"WHERE ARE MY GUARDS! They're supposed to be on the lookout!"

Yelled the sandslash. Carl flinched.

"I uh... T-They told me ah... They were in the tunnels a second ago amd they just left or something. Nobody knows where they dissapeared to."

Said the breeloom. Sanash punched the steel wall, putting a large dent in it. An abomasnow came into the room and tossed the severed heaf of a blastoise to the sandslash.

"Here's your food, sir."

He said before quickly leaving. The sandslash angrily bit off a large peace of the head with ease, as if he was biting into a marshmellow. He swallowed it then glared at the breloom. The breloom sighed.

"You look like you're about to murder me, sir."

Said carl.

"Hey now, it isn't normal for a fighting type pokemon to be so intimidated. Here's what I want you to do; go get all of our men that know the move dig, and tell them to go be the new lookouts. The Elgiem is going to be bringing the enemies here soon. I wouldn't want to dissapoint our little visitor now. Go, hurry."

Said the sandslash.

"Yes sir..."

To be continued....








HanShotFirst (2014-10-17 21:47:11)
Oh god, someone link the Turn Down For What Kricketune remix. It's hilarious.
Taka! Kujata! Condor! Tajadol~!
PhoenixDawn (2014-10-18 03:20:46)
Omfg.
[IMG]http://i57.tinypic.com/2zs43fb.jpg[/IMG]
AntiChrist (2014-10-18 11:41:50)
I have a plot twist waiting to happen that I'm pretty sure you guys will like
Nutsy (2014-10-18 12:03:47)
Sweg.

I've looked for the Kriketune remix. I couldn't find it.
PhoenixDawn (2014-10-18 13:31:44)
^ Same. It sounds like it is funny since it is a remix with Kricketune
[IMG]http://i57.tinypic.com/2zs43fb.jpg[/IMG]
HanShotFirst (2014-10-18 14:52:02)
It's on soundcloud, not youtube.

Turn down for Whoop
Taka! Kujata! Condor! Tajadol~!
PhoenixDawn (2014-10-18 23:07:24)
Oh that explains it.
[IMG]http://i57.tinypic.com/2zs43fb.jpg[/IMG]
Leviathan (2014-10-19 03:41:11)
There is every known user in here except me.


And you claim to love me.
I'm an open book, there are few questions I won't answer honestly, no matter how embarrassing.
Nutsy (2014-10-19 05:10:36)
Sign up then.
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