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Episode 1 -Intro. 3DSPlaza Baby Days.
Started by RatchetRambow
(2014-07-19 10:11:32)
RatchetRambow (2014-07-19 10:11:32)
So, this is the first episode of my series, 3DSPlaza Baby Days and I wanna get stuck straight in. I'll try and make these aslong as I can!

3DSPlaza Baby Days - Ep. 1!

XAmbassadors: "So, you're making a story about us and our children? These seems all very legit."

LightBlu1: "Dadee, arr wee gonna bee fwamous?"

RavenQueen: "I hope not."

scarygirl: "Shush, mommy." Sits playing with building blocks and cries when they fall down.

marioplushpro: "Mwa! Mommy, I still waiting fwor my dioaper!"

Aleks: Stares at marioplushpro frantically. "Wou are?"

dash3456 and EyelessJack: Just sit chew there toes, trying to stand up but cry when they fall over. These two are really close.

RavenQueen: "I'LL CHANGE YOUR DIAPER JUST GIVE ME A GOD DAMN MINUTE."

marioplushpro cries.

TFJudoTheScizor: "I hwate dis pawace. Too many baba."

PhantomR: "Me too. Wet's pwan a 'scape pwan"

Everyone: "ME TOO! ME TOO!"

Perfect_Chaos: Falls down the stairs "Chaos hurt hwead"

XAmbassadors: "Oh, this is TOO MUCH."

Huggie: Crawling around in circles. "Wook at me, I a doggie chasing tail."

brolyfiver: "I BETTER SPINNING THEN YOU."

This makes Huggie cry and she gets rocked to sleep.

dash3456: "I BETTER SPINNING THEN ANY YOU BISHES."

Parents: "DASH!"

This gets everyone spinning around in circles.

LightBlu1: "I feew sick..."

PhantomR: "I fink everyone does..."

Everyone nods, then cries.

Parents: "Great."

TFJudoTheScizor: Is now asleep with Huggie, who is sucking her thumb.

brolyfiver: "PUT PEPPER PIG ON TV"

Aleks: "NO, PUT WESTLING."

scarygirl: "WHAT ABOUT KATY PEWY?"

CrashLander: "MICKEY! MICKEY MOUSEEEEEE!"

RavenQueen: "EVERYONE, NOTHING IS GOING ON TV. GET TO BED NOW."

The parents put everyone to bed, a couple of them still going on about TV. Lullabies get sung and everyone is shortly asleep.



So there we go. First episode completed! I hope you enjoyed it. The future episodes are planned to be longer. Thank you to the cast who took the time to sign up.

Have any advice? Let me know in the comments!

NOTE: Aleks is now out of this story and I'm looking for a person to replace him. Please let me know if you are interested in his space!

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2014-07-20 02:55:08

Cody14063 (2014-07-19 11:27:49)
This is about 3DSP users, not about 3DSP itself. :/
[img] http://3dsplaza.com/chat/crown.gif [/img]Cody14063


Cody14063 was here and can clearly see you. STILL!

You give up? Ok you can leave now!


RatchetRambow (2014-07-19 11:29:18)
^ I know. It's meant to be that way.
RainbowDash14 (2014-07-19 12:17:21)
Rainbow here! I.........dont get it. Sorry, just not my genre of reading. I like reading greek mythology books like Percy Jackson. (I've read them all!)
Everything in life happens for a reason.

I like rainbows.


Jason2k14 (2014-07-19 13:45:45)
I never knew babies knew how to spell wrestling or Katy Perry. But uh ...



*burns computer
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RatchetRambow (2014-07-19 14:45:07)
^ Fixed
LightBlu1 (2014-07-19 17:45:26)
In the next episode, make me barf everywhere! .D.
... k.
Aleks (2014-07-19 18:03:38)
i want to murder every script.
Aleks (2014-07-19 18:04:47)
take me out of this story.
Jason2k14 (2014-07-19 18:15:02)
lmaoo aleks right ??

this story is pure sh!t. tell the world, tell the world!1!one

EDIT: Although this is pure sh!t, it's only the 1st episode. Hopefully, there'll be major improvements. Because I am spotting numerous flaws in this.

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2014-07-20 01:16:43

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RatchetRambow (2014-07-19 18:16:40)
Guys... I'm just getting started.

You guys are out and staying out.

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2014-07-20 01:19:32

Jason2k14 (2014-07-19 18:21:14)
Eh, whatevs. I don't need to be placed in such a sh!tty story anyway. I got my own Series, which is ten times better than some baby crap.
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Aleks (2014-07-19 18:30:39)
Thank you.

I know I can be an ass but I just do not want to be in this. I'm sorry but no. Raven as the mom kind of did it for me. Personal issue, but no thank you. no pls

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2014-07-20 01:31:48

RatchetRambow (2014-07-20 09:11:28)
Okay, if people are gonna be so hateful and not even TRY to help me make it better, but no. You have to be so disrespectful.

Closed and stopping the series unless people REALLY REALLY encourage me to get it up and running again.
 

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