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AngelRibbons (2014-07-06 19:10:07)WOW! This is going to be sooooo amazing, I can already tell! <3
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PokeCat (2014-07-06 22:50:33)@Connor
It's a freaking book. It's 133 pages. Writter's block happens too. Wasn't easy writting this thing.
Fascism (2014-07-06 23:33:32)I'd publish my books, but my longest is 72 pages and it's part gore and yaoi.
Signatures are stupid.
LaughingJill (2014-07-07 00:31:01)My brother writes chapter's that are a twelve to sixteen pages long.
He plans for sixteen to twenty chapters.
If he wrote the least, it would come out to 192 pages per book. If he wrote the most, it would come out to 320 pages per book.
I think you can put more effort into something that's just around 133 or less, and up the page count. You could do that or lower the price.
Fascism (2014-07-07 10:23:55)You should've lowered the price
Nobody is going to buy something for ten dollars that if it's actually any good (which I doubt) it will be pirated in two days
Considering you're an amateur writer and this is your first full book, most of us won't read it because of the price, it's just a waste of hard earned cash
Signatures are stupid.
little5 (2014-07-07 11:28:56)^
"I think you can put more effort into something that's just around 133 or less, and up the page count. You could do that or lower the price."
133 pages isn't enough. I could finish that book in 1-3 hours. .3.
Reading books over and over doesn't suit many people. I agree with everyone else, make it longer.
PokeCat (2014-07-07 15:09:24)To all you guys above, I don't set the price, FYI, blurb.com does.
As far as making it longer, it might become longer when I create the finalized version. There's 133 pages in the first hand-written copy.
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I finally finished the book, so here are some bits and peices of the book as a sneak preview before it's published.
Table Of Contents (Offical List):
Prolouge
Just Your Average Day
The Sweetest Saviour
Remembering The Past
Time For Sign-ups
Off To The Woods
Swords And Sticks
The Quiet Aristocrat
Fights And One Terrible Night
Manchester Problems
Hacker In The Sky
Welcome To Washington
Prepare For Battle
Redescovering Myself
Decisions Decisions
Epilouge
Chapter Memorable Quotes:
Chapter 2, page 8: She beconed him with a finger, drawing him ever closer. His last step was a mistake. With an audible smack, Amina punched him square in the face, causing him to stagger back, holding his nose with a hand as blood begain to coat his fingers.
Chapter 3, page 10: Amina smiled brightly. "It's not much, but it's home."
"It's more than I've got."
Chapter 4, page 14: Like ripping off a band-aid, I lifted my shirt to reveal my little blue tail. It drooped slightly, reflecting my nervous and worried mood.
Chapter 5, page 24: "My name's Alyssa, but people like to call me Bunny."
Chapter 6, page 32: I closed my eyes tightly and cringed as I waited for the shining sword to decend upon me. I heard nothing for a long while, until I felt a hand rest gently on my sholder.
Chapter 8, page 57: "Morning everyone." All eyes turned to me. Alexander, Gold, Lola, and Bunny gave me hostile looks. Amina looked worried, like she didn't know what to do.
I won't give you TOO much before I publish the book. Once it's published, I'll post a link here for you to buy the book, which'll cost no more than 8 or 10 dollars.