little5 (2014-04-17 20:01:29)

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Chapter One: Mixed Emotions
Prim's POV:
I was sitting there, cuddled up with ButterCup and a blanket while I stared at the TV with wide eyes. "Katniss turn around.. Katniss.. Please. Turn around," I whispered shakily. My eyes widened as I watched the tribute ready their bow. I started chanting over and over again.. Each time with more anxiousness. "Katniss, katniss please.." She turned around and raised her bow. "KATNISS!" It was too late. My heart stopped, I practically froze. Katniss had been shot. I couldn't hold it back.. Tears were running down my face, and the soft crying turned into a sob. My mother quickly rushed over and cradled me in her arms like Katniss did after I had that nightmare before the reaping. I could tell she was holding back tears. She rocked me back and forward and shushed me. Telling me everything was going to be all right, but it wasn't. The arrow went straight through her chest, probably puncturing her heart. The tribute who had killed her ran off.. Rue slowly went over to her. I could see the tears streaming down her face as she tried to stop the bleeding with leaves and Katniss' shirt. Katniss struggled to say her final words.. "T-tell them I-I l-love," her eyes started to flutter and Rue whistled. Attempting to calm Katniss down. I cried more into my mother's chest. "No.. She can't leave us." Katniss' eyes finally closed and I sobbed more and more. "No, Katniss wouldn't want me to be like this.." I felt anger rising through me. Anger towards myself for letting Katniss go, it should've been me.. Everyone needs her. Anger towards the capital for doing this. "to control the districts" my ass. Anger towards Katniss.. To be continued.

Critique my story. Do you like it?

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~Nia~Teppelin~ (2014-04-17 20:05:49)

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Good so far -b +1

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