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max and claire
CoyBoat275 (2014-03-25 09:47:10)It was june 12 one day before summer, summer is the time when i get to see my sweet Claire. How her face so fabulous in sun light, her eyes shines in the light. She is the most beautiful girl u will ever see. But this story is like a Romeo & Juliet story, I cant see my sweet sweet Claire.
There was no war between familys, just that our's moms dont like Claire nor me, tis sad summer. Luckly, for Clarie and I, we have made a tree house in the woods in secret. In order so that Claire and me can se each other every day.
But today was a lucky day. Today Claire's parents is going on a trip to afraca, and, even though how much she hates me, sh aloud Claire to stay with us.
"Max! Have you hear the good news?" Claire said as she huged me.
"No, what is it Claire?"
"Im goting to be at your house fot the time that my mom and dad are gone."
"Tis great news."
"Yes, it is, I will see u at the end of the school day." she said as she kiss me and ran off.When school end, me and Claire got on the bus together.
Then suddenly, something strange happens, i had a vision that Claire fell down the tree house and broke her back, but I didn't heed the warning. As the bus stop at my house, Claire and I walk all the way home, we were happyer than anyone could be.
On the way home I had another vision, of her falling off an breaking her back, and she was bleeding fast, she was dieing fast.
"Max? Max?" she said with a weak voice, "MAX!!! Wake up."
She shouke me. We were at my house.
"What is wrong with u?" she said in a nagging voice."What? Oh! *chuckle* Sorry i just..." she interupted me.
"Just what!?!?"
"I didnt get enough sleep?"
We were both silence.
"Your acting wearder every day Max. Are u positive your ok?"
2014-04-28 13:56:27
PASTA!


Perfect_Chaos (2014-04-14 19:56:51)Also continue it when yo want to, otherwise you'll just have small posts like that.
CoyBoat275 (2014-04-16 05:14:32)i forgot to putit in big post. And give me a review of my story ok
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this is a romance creepypasta story. there is going to be average creepypasta, but not as much
2014-03-31 05:51:10