the2ndwii2 (2013-10-08 13:58:44)

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Robert = lime text
Leo = red text
Sophie = blue text


The story...


*Driving* Got to get to the work. I'm running late again.*Car smashes into the glass doors* Don't care insurance will cover it. The lift doors are closing!*Car smashes into the lift door and half the car only makes it.* Maybe reverse driving wasn't the best idea...

He said he'll be on this lift. *Lift door opens.* You know what? I think he still is on ground floor.

'GaSp' 'WhiZz' running up 20 floors wasn't the best idea.*Faints*


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Should we poke him? *pokes Robert*

WHA? *leg springs up hit Leo's nuts*

OUCH! *falls down the stairs* OUCH! OW! OH! SMASH! *Falls out window*

zzz zzz zzz

Just great...


Hmmm. This story is unoriginal... It too much of a copy, but I did enjoy Connor Pokémon Adventure, but I need something more original... I know!

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2013-10-09 12:31:49

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ConnorRonnoc (2013-10-08 15:07:12)

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Hmm... a guy getting knocked out in the first chapter? A gag of a guy getting kicked in the ga-hoonies? The female protagonist named Sophie? Poking the unconscious guy?

Now where have I seen this before....

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2013-10-08 15:08:01

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