LyssaRawr (2013-10-04 19:54:06)

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I choked on my words
Like you struck me with swords
Feeling so stupid
As if I had been struck by cupid

You left me there and didn't shed a tear
I ran through the mist, not the slightest bit clear
Cold tears fly from my eyes
Thinking to myself "I hate guys! I hate guys!"

I trip and fall, like I did for you
Screaming out, "We were the perfect two!"
I stop and drop to my knees
Begging for mercy "please! please!"

I stand up and look around
Nothing, not even a sound
I look at my hand and wipe my eyes
For there our rings lyed

So maybe we're not ment to be?
So maybe love isn't the key?
Just remember I will always love you
Maybe it will happen someday, when we are a united two

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Jason2k14 (2013-10-04 20:13:15)

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Cool poem. <3 But wrong forum.

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Jason2k14 (2013-10-04 20:31:15)

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Kishy, you Nazi..

Also, Alyssa's poem is actually meaning something, and of course it has rhyming to make the poem catchy.

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LyssaRawr (2013-10-04 22:11:38)

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First off, this is a Ballad. Second of all, Kishy, I don't care. You are the most disrespectful human being I have ever met. I shall write my poem how I want and I do not need your corrections because they are wrong. So you should stop criticizing, not only me, but everyone and look apon yourself because you sure as hell are not perfect. Third off, I am not a "little kid", I am in fact quite very mature and well-mannered. Something you have not reached to accomplish. I shall and will not let you disrespect my work. If you do not care about something simply leave it alone.

And thank you everyone else.

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Jason2k14 (2013-10-04 22:57:20)

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Alright. Uhh... This is getting outta hand. Kishy, why don't you stfu and stop actin' like a Nazi. How much you wanna bet you're always hated in the outside world? Get a life, and Alyssa, just ignore, and continue. Before, a forum mod closes this for arguing. Just tryna settle this argument, not trying to be a wannabe mod.

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ConnorRonnoc (2013-10-04 23:09:34)

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... i liek mudkipz?

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Jason2k14 (2013-10-04 23:52:10)

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^ Mudkipz's face be liek "I've finally lost my v i r g i n i t y" LOL

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LyssaRawr (2013-10-05 00:18:19)

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Void, is this your poem? No. It is mine and I shall write it the way I please. I did not create it for your petty complaints and criticism, I wrote because I needed to express thoughts. And clearly you need a dictionary because, "ment" is a word. You can complain all you like but it will not make a difference. So thank you for wasting your time, once again.

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little5 (2013-10-05 01:10:55)

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Nice. Oh, and you could've just edited your comment instead a of multi-posting 4 in a row.

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LyssaRawr (2013-10-05 02:07:05)

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Kishy do you ever shut up? You're an pathetic, rude, direspectful, and annoying twit. Get out of my forum, you have no business commenting and criticising my work. Stop acting like you know everything in this world, and that you're perfect. You're the definition of hatred. Farewell.

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