spiritwolf(2013-09-28 01:12:16)So Jeff the killer had just moved in she wasn't surprised because it was cheap for its location ( I'm too lazy to put wat happens to him) but he burned his eyeled and carved a smile into his face with a knife, Jane had been invited for a party by Jeff parents earlier, so when she went over because her parents weren't there, the sight of Jeff made her faint, when she woke up she was gaged and was tied to a chair (and so on) he poured gasoline and bleach on Jane and cought her on fire , she now helps jeff's soon to be victims by telling them not to go to sleep. Plz comment on how I could improve thx
-Alex
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So Jeff the killer had just moved in she wasn't surprised because it was cheap for its location ( I'm too lazy to put wat happens to him) but he burned his eyeled and carved a smile into his face with a knife, Jane had been invited for a party by Jeff parents earlier, so when she went over because her parents weren't there, the sight of Jeff made her faint, when she woke up she was gaged and was tied to a chair (and so on) he poured gasoline and bleach on Jane and cought her on fire , she now helps jeff's soon to be victims by telling them not to go to sleep. Plz comment on how I could improve thx
-Alex
2013-09-28 01:13:30
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