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Hearts of Gold
Started by Super_~_Junior.
(2013-08-17 05:42:33)
Super_~_Junior. (2013-08-17 05:42:33)
It was a cold & rainy night & northern london traffic was a mess & everyone was going on vacation for the holidays. "Taxi!" yelled a young beautiful woman standing in the rain, As the taxi stopped to let her in a handsome young man grabbed the car door as so did she for a moment there was just awkward silence because they both wanted the taxi but didn't want to share, As she turns to look at the young man he does the same at her, Nothing but shock struck both of them as they stared into each others eyes it felt like forever but it was only a few seconds, "Um.. uh.. Sorry miss you can have this taxi I'll just wait" Loudly said the young man, " Oh no it's okay you can go I'll wait" said the young woman, "Well.. Since we're both gonna wait lets just take this one instead." said the young man. As they both got into the taxi. "So.. My name is Serena.. What's yours?." she said " Oh uh.. Hi Serena, I am Matthew.." as he shyly & quietly said. Serena looked at Matthew & said " What's the matter? Am I making you nervous?.." Mathew immediately responds " No, No no. I just I don't " Matthew then laughs Serena smiles " Um well it was nice meeting you. " Serena said, " It was nice meeting you too " Matthew softly said. As Serena started to get out of the taxi Matthew said " I hope I get to see you again.." Serena smiles " Same here!" She happily says.. The next day approaches... "Mum I told you I already had plans this afternoon with friends. I understand, Yes I understand see you there" Said a bothered Serena on the phone. As Serena rushes to the park to met up with her ill mother, Arriving at the park Serena sees a familiar face as she walks towards him " Hello " Says Serena while smiling, Matthew turned around & said " Wow, Hi I wasn't ACTUALLY expecting to see you ever again since I got my car fixed " Matthew starts to laugh, Serena smiles & says " Yeah same here.. I am sort of new here." Matthew said " I can see that." " Is it really that noticeable??" Serena said, Matthew giggled & said " Kind of, But I mean it's not a bad thing, It's a good thing." Serena smiled & said " Right. " Matthew giggles & blushes " I have to go meet up with someone It was nice seeing you " Serena softly said Matthew gently grabbed Serena's hand " Wait.." He said " Could I.. Could I get your number?.." Matthew sweetly & softly said to her while staring into her eyes, She froze from being amazed by how beautiful his gorgeous blue eyes are. " Y-y-y-yes s-s-sure.." Serena says Matthew blushes & smiles, " I'll see you around " Matthew said. Later that night around 8pm Serena's phone gets a call " Hello who is this? " She says, " Hi. Sorry if I called a little late " Serena shocked of that fact that Matthew actually called her she says " Oh... Hi no, It's fine you didn't call at a bad time no worries. " He giggles then says " Okay.. You wanna go out for a quick cup of coffee or something?.." "Yes! Yes I would love to!" Serena says in a every excited voice. Matthew giggles & says " Okay I'll see you there " 10 minutes later Serena arrives at the small Coffee shop 5 blocks away from were she lives, " Hey! " Matthew said loudly, Serena blushed & giggled & then said " Hello there " then they seat down together " so how are you feeling?.." Matthew softly said. Serena smiles then says " I am good thanks" Matthew smiles " I am sorry but I can't help to notice how beautiful you are." Serena blushes even more " Oh god, Thanks you're.... beautiful to.." Matthew smiles & blushes " Thank you.. " he said. After they had coffee & were leaving Serena fell & hurt her ankle " Are you okay?!?" Matthew said in a worried voice " Ugh.. It hurts but I am okay I think.." Serena said. Matthew picked Serena up due to that fact that she couldn't walk. " Wow, Matt you don't have to take me home I-" Matthew cut her off saying " Don't, You're hurt let me take care of it" Serena smiles & warps her arms around Matthew's shoulders, After they arrive at her house Serena says "Thank you a lot really thanks" He blushes " It's really fine there's no need to thank m-" Serena kisses him on the lips " Oh god... I am so so sorry..." Matthew looks at her " Don't be.. That was great" Matthew kisses Serena & holds her close to himself. " Wow.. I don't know what to say, I've only known you for 2 days... & I... I feel so crazy for you" Serena said. Matthew blushes then says " I feel the exact same way..." They repeatedly kiss & hold each other as they cuddle on the couch together...... The next morning " Good morning beautiful " Matthew said to Serena. "Oh good morning" Serena said & smiled Matthew kisses her & says " I could be here in bed with you forever " Serena smiles & says " So could I." Matthew smiles & holds Serena close to him. " Oh god, What time is it????" Serena said looking confused. "It's like 1 pm why?" Matthew said. " Crap!" Serena yelled as she rushed out of bed & into clothes " Wow relax what's the big deal?" Matthew said while confused & worried. Serena said " I had to go to work 5 hours ago! " Matthew laughs & smiles " What's so funny? " Serena said. " You do know that it's a holiday, No work silly." Matthew said while laughing. Serena blushed & said " O-oh... " Matthew smiled & said " Come here, Lay down with me. Relax." Serena smiles & cuddles with Matthew in bed, " This is so weird.. Why are we doing this?" Serena said while laughing, Matthew said " I don't know.. But I like it.. A lot" Serena smiled then kissed Matthew softly, Matthew smiled & said " wow.." Serena looked at Matthew & said "What?" Matthew smiled & said " Nothing, This is just so weird from everything else I've ever done." Serena giggled & said "Good or bad thing?" Matthew smiled " Good thing." Serena hugged Matthew, "I have to go. I'll see you later, I promise. " Matthew said.
================================================ To be continued I'll add more later ~


This post has been edited one or more times, the last time was:
2013-08-24 07:24:54

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Super_~_Junior. (2013-08-17 19:24:23)
Thanks & I updated it c:
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MeNobody14 (2013-08-18 03:25:30)
You are getting sloppy, Belle. Proofread it, please.

Also, when using Italics throughout the entire thing, instead of using caps to emphasise, simply use normal text.

Example:
He ran around in circles, never actually expecting to get anywhere.

See?
It's time for review, kiddo!
Super_~_Junior. (2013-08-18 22:34:19)
Excuse me? I am not trying hard on this I was bored & on my 3ds & I decided to start on a love story. So please don't be so harsh on something that was just made out of boredom !
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Super_~_Junior. (2013-08-19 01:42:02)
& my name isn't " Belle "
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MeNobody14 (2013-08-19 03:35:47)
^That's another thing. "&" marks are for names. You don't use them when people are speaking.
It's time for review, kiddo!
Super_~_Junior. (2013-08-19 04:56:09)
I use & all I want, All that matters is that I spell correctly now go away & stop bugging me all the damn time
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Super_~_Junior. (2013-08-20 02:26:16)
I'll start adding more tonight c:
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Super_~_Junior. (2013-08-21 04:42:10)

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Super_~_Junior. (2013-08-23 09:58:47)
Thanks
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