ConnorRonnoc (2013-07-23 17:36:34)

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Grammar: GOOD
Spelling: GOOD
My understanding of it: GOOD
Originality: GOOD

Overall total: 7/10= GOOD

ConnorRonnoc's Comments:

Meh, it's mediocre. Personally, I think it's very well written, just a bit boring, that's all from me right now.

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MeNobody14 (2013-07-23 17:54:32)

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Since it's not finished, I will refrain from my review for now. But, I will say one thing:


Crappy punctuation.

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