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Slenderman Strikes Part 2
MeNobody14 (2013-07-16 22:26:13)Stories Must be contained in one thread, as stated in rule No. 3.
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It's time for review, kiddo!
I had no idea...
simmonsa1851 (2013-07-18 00:33:56)Part 3
John was struck with fear. He'd heard the rumors, but never thought that something like that could be among us. Startled he reached for his gun. His pockets were empty. He dropped it when he was running...
He had no time, the thing was stretching it's limbs toward him. John ran, faster hat he could in his life, but Slenderman just drifted along, moving to one place after another. The thing had it's cold, death-like arms wrapped around him. John searched throughout his knowledge to find a solution. He knew this thing could teleport, so all chances of getting away were minimal. He had to find his gun.
The black silk-like cloth was still in it's place, and the trees, hung with lifeless souls, was unmissable. He had to go to where he was before, and somehow find his gun in the darkness.
Slenderman's limbs were his only problem, (besides the fact that his chances of getting the gun were about a million to one). He had to get out and move away from this beast. He tossed and turned and kicked until the arms shrunk to their normal size. He ran and saw that glimpse of white once again, and the forest of the dead. He just needed to recognize the path he took. The monster was gaining on him, and since John had no way of finding out where he came from, he'd be there for a while...
To Be Continued...
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And the story continues....
All John owned was a small, 9mm handgun that was only able to hold 5 rounds at one time.As he went across the village-like town to the woods, he gun was noticed by everyone. The people looking from the window were frightened. They shut their blinds and locked their doors. There were no medics or police officers or firefighter because, as said before, this place practically doesn't even exist...
He went forward, in his search for the killer. Finally he went to the woods, which was eerie. He could hear the last words of the people who were mercilessly killed by this mysterious figure. Then, something caught his eye, a glimpse of something white and shining, that quickly went away.
He followed it, through animal corpses and splintering trees, until he saw something that made his heart pound right through his chest.
Millions of dead bodies were just hanging there. Lifeless, and strangely, faceless. And, hidden in a bush, was a single piece of silk-like cloth. 'What's this', he wondered. Then, from behind him, he felt a cold hand laying on his shoulder. It felt like death itself. John turned around, and there stood a long and skinny man. 'So the rumors are true', John thought 'Slenderman'
To be continued...
End of part 2. Tell if you liked it. If you didn't, leave some feedback, k? Bye!!!
2013-07-17 05:13:50