ConnorRonnoc (2013-07-07 07:17:31)

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I've decided to write a story.
!DON'T LIKE DON'T READ!
CHAPTER 1: Let the adventure begin! PART 1

Connor was messing with somethink on the table.
"Hey doofus watcha workin' on now" said Ronnoc walking into the room.
"One stop being mean, two the names Connor and you know that and I am working on a dimensional generator".
"Looks like a phone" said Ronnoc smirking.
"-and your face looks like a piece of s**t watcha gonna do?" Said Connor.
"I'll tell you what I'm gonna do.... I'll kill you!" Said Ronnoc diving at Connor.
Connor tried fighting back but it was useless, his twin brother was a jock and he was a geek.
Ronnoc shoved him back and landed on the Dimensional Generator causing it to go off.
"Shi-" Said the both of them as the room went black.

End of Part 1

So whadda ya think?

This post has been edited one or more times, the last time was:
2013-07-09 13:32:46

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MeNobody14 (2013-07-07 12:56:36)

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I think I'll start tagging everything like that!

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chriz (2013-07-07 19:22:15)

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... eh

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Super_~_Junior. (2013-07-07 20:29:14)

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I give this story 0.0/10/10. And watch your language! No bypassing/cursing allowed.

This post has been edited one or more times, the last time was:
2013-07-08 03:31:03

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ConnorRonnoc (2013-07-08 20:14:55)

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So should I abandone this story?

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MeNobody14 (2013-07-08 23:44:02)

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Yes. You should.

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MeNobody14 (2013-07-09 00:22:24)

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^Lawl. Bully? I'm simply the critic that delivers the blunt, hard, depressing truth. Like Simon Cowell.

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ConnorRonnoc (2013-07-09 06:24:34)

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^No your just an a**hole.

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FrequentDeath (2013-07-09 09:52:10)

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You're such a rebel, breaking the rules.

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simmonsa1851 (2013-07-23 11:31:18)

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Wait, MeNobody was telling you to abandon your story and he's one of the 3 muskateers??

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simmonsa1851 (2013-07-23 11:37:03)

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^Shut ya piehole

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MeNobody14 (2013-07-23 14:44:44)

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Lawl. This was written long before the Three Muskateerz.

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ConnorRonnoc (2013-07-23 14:48:36)

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^ Yes long before, when I was a rubbish writer.

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ConnorRonnoc (2013-07-23 14:50:36)

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But when I got good we became friends, it was just my past arrogance, but I find I'm more mature now and- Ooh COOKIES! OMNOMNOMNOM!!!

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MeNobody14 (2013-07-23 16:07:48)

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^SHARE TEH COOKYZ.

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