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The Graves
Started by Super_~_Junior.
(2013-07-02 07:38:43)
Super_~_Junior. (2013-07-02 07:38:43)
Alone I walked solemn

along the gravel paths

in the bleak shadows of the graves

when I saw an entourage dressed in black

with a coffin of finest oak

Who is buried in this late hour

so secretly laid to rest

in the most distant corner

in the field of death?

When I reached the open grave

the night laid still and desolate

curious I sneaked to the edge

and gazed surprised down

in the open empty coffin

when I felt a hard push

and fell headlong

in the soft velvet death

In the suffocating dark

I could hear

ashes to ashes

and earth to earth

that fell on my lid

and my brother and my fiance

laughing as ravens from hell



A small short story I wrote.


This post has been edited one or more times, the last time was:
2013-07-02 14:39:04

jEsUs ChRiSt
Super_~_Junior. (2013-07-02 15:17:23)

jEsUs ChRiSt
Super_~_Junior. (2013-07-03 22:49:17)

jEsUs ChRiSt
MeNobody14 (2013-07-04 00:03:05)
Ermm.. Ok. I believe this belongs in the "Poetry" forum, though.
It's time for review, kiddo!
Super_~_Junior. (2013-07-04 01:01:10)
It's not poetry though o-e
jEsUs ChRiSt
MeNobody14 (2013-07-04 01:10:46)
^It's more poetry than it is a story.
It's time for review, kiddo!
Super_~_Junior. (2013-07-04 01:15:29)
True .3. I'll re post it in the Poetry.
jEsUs ChRiSt
MeNobody14 (2013-07-04 02:11:46)
^Yayz.
It's time for review, kiddo!
 

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