AntiChrist (2013-06-18 14:59:23)

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Haha. I thought this would be another lame story about a Pokemon game glitch. This is actually pretty unique, using a real world style of Pokemon. Good job.

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AntiChrist (2013-06-20 16:34:53)

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@thejes

I think it's already creative enough. But everyone's entitled to their opinion so I'm not here to criticize.

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WYoshiX2 (2013-06-22 06:27:55)

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Not too bad so far. I like the differing point of view, though I think it could use a little more fluency and detail. I'd still love to see more.

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TFDFrance (2013-06-23 20:20:19)

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I thought this was going to be some lavender town crap. I was surprised to find out it wasn't

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