TROLLz0r (2013-06-03 13:25:12)

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Omniscient point of view

God have given us life to live
God have given us limbs for us to walk
God has given us ears to hear
And a mouth to talk

He gave us a mind to think with
And bliss and love
But all that he had said
Did his words ever sunk in our head?

As the seasons changed
And time flied past
Even if we forgot about his love
His everlasting affection will always Last

So we must thank him
For all of these
Because of all
The love he released for us

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2013-06-03 20:25:58

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Song_Of_Storms (2013-06-10 15:34:13)

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This is good

A few grammatical and wording errors, but well done-b

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chriz (2013-07-07 17:34:14)

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God bless. Love it!

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MeNobody14 (2013-07-12 00:19:24)

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Nice job. +1

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Song_Of_Storms (2013-10-15 02:52:26)

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bounce

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