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Revival (Series)
Started by MadHatter
(2013-05-26 03:34:14)
MadHatter (2013-05-26 03:34:14)
Hello everyone,I come again with a new "series". Now, please, if you notice I spelt something wrong,there's no space, or I missed a letter, please just tell me.My keyboard is old and crummy, but even if I pay for one, my dad refuses to get a new one. I will try my best for that. Second of all, with this, I think you guys will like it and actually take the time to read it. Thank you and let's start.

Our story starts in a placeunknown tomost of human-kind. A secret place that's horrible and dangerous to anyone without the form of an angel. Not one of the white angels with beautiful long wings you always grew upwith. These monsters do have wings. But do the most horrific things with them. They fly high into their red as cherry sky, then swoop down, stabbing you in the neck with their talons and carry you away, hanging onlyy by the most painful piece of skin in your whole formofa human. They take off your skin and leave your flesh for the Fedwerquads, as if you were never anything. They use your skin to go to the human world, called Earth, to trick people into glideing in yourportal, where then, they feed on the souls.

These monsters are simplycalled Soul Angels.

And this is the story of one named Lauren Harku Deqwasing. Lauren Harku is a young Soul Angel, just about tothrive into a deadly beast.

Lauren Harku awoke in a strange box made of oak wood, obviously carved to fit her exact body. Lauren Harku is14. She is well developed. Lauren Harku is just about 5'5. Her chosen outfit is a leg-showing black dress. Strapless and full of fabric. The pattern told it's own tale of sorrow and battle through deathly shores. Lauren Harku's hair was a mind blowing strawberry blonde worn down to her hips with curls at the tips. Lauren Harku's structure was curves, but herhipsweren't big. Usually the shoes of choice were strappy wedges, matching the dress.
This was how SOul Angels were supposed to be. To esecially corrupt young men, who's souls were most to heal the long health. FemaleSoul Angels always choose the outfitthey think would attract most males. But this was Lauren Harku's first time, and catching a male would be the hardest...

Leave a comment if you want more, Ireally think that themore you getinto this and into theplot,the better it will be,like in any book/story.
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