XxDarkMagexX (2013-05-15 19:10:33)

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Okay, So I'm gonna write a CreepyPasta, this'll be my first ever CP so no hate please although I love constructive criticism :]

NOTE: All posts/Parts of this story will be added on by editing the first, original post

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Part 1
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I run...As fast as my legs will allow. A heavy breath smuthers my back, urging me on, It's playing with me, it could kill me here but it's playing with me. The branches scratch against me, snaring me, slowing me down, grabbing at me. The ground swallows my feet. I run.


I see a faint light, hope, I run faster, the branches grab harder, the darkness closes in, the breathing get closer, the tree's seem to lean into me, eager to be the one that spills my blood, I face a bramble, thick, glinting with thorns, the dark thing right behind me, I charge, I push and grunt through the bush, the thorns tear away at my skin, blood drips, the Dark thing groans, unable to pass....crying, howling, bloodcurdling screams fill the forest, the forest where the Dark Things hide...the forest where the naughty kids go and never come back.......


(Editors Note: -.-" Yeah, I know, this isn't that good, but I'm only 12 and this is my first ever CreepyPasta.....I hope you like it.....Please comment :]

-Seamus Doyle)

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2013-05-16 02:17:08

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