Ilurv (2013-05-09 22:30:25)

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Prolouge
Blitzpaw slipped through the shadows with ease. She dodged a thicket of brambles, muttering under her breath, "Fox dung, this place is covered in thorns,"

Finnaly, she arrived at the moonstone, a place that had not been used by the clans for many, many moons. "Why in the Starclan would they bring me here..." she thought. With a quick glance around, Blitzpaw slipped inside the cave. it was extremley dark, just like in the kit tales, and Blitzpaw had to stop for a moment and try to sniff a way to the moonstone.

Voices whispered in the the distance, Blitzpaw...come this way...we have something to tell you... And against her will, Bliztpaw followed.

She soon came across a giant stone...she smacked right into it, actually. it was extremly smooth, and Blitzpaw scurried back as she felt cool water at the base of the structure. As if the stone was crying.

Blitzpaw...when the moon is high...touch your nose to the stone... the voices called out. Blitzpaw, determined, stood up. "I didn't come all this way for nothing."

she waited just a while longer, and then, the cave lit up in a brillliant light. Blitzpaw screeched and flew back, the silver light pouring in from the cieling and bouncing off the stone. It created dancing shadows and patterns that amazed Blitzpaw. Then she remembered, and scrabled over to the glowing stone. Taking a deep, shuddering breath, she touched her nose to the stone.

Like the moonpool, she was transported into what looked like starclan territory.

A cat with stars in his pelt floated down.

Unless something happens soon, Nightclan will be in turmoil.

Blitzpaw flinched as he spoke, his galaxy-filled eyes glittering sadly.

Unless Nightclan changes their ways, unless you deliver this message, Nightclan's future will be doomed.

The starry cat then began to fade.

I have completed my task, he said, I am free...

Blitzpaw woke with a start. She spent two days getting back, and then, she kept the prophecy to herself. Nobody needed to know. She didn't want to scare Blawestar. Besides, she wont be alive for future Nightclan, right?

Part one coming soon.

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FrequentDeath (2013-05-10 03:52:19)

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"4. Keep stories long, make sure you have the time to write one, and instead of a few lines which you used the enter key to put a space in between dialogue to make it look longer than it is."

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SongBlaze (2013-05-11 04:56:17)

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shut your faces people. no ones perfect.

anyways, that's great! can't wait for the next part xP beware..something bad is going to happen to me soon.

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-11 08:52:12)

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This is nice.



But cats suck.

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