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Rainpool's Story
AmayaTime8D (2013-03-17 21:39:44)Mooooooooooooooooooooore.
Edit your post and write a new chapter.
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Nice story, bro. 
HaruChan (2013-03-30 20:49:00)Rainpaw calls everything that she doesn't like disgusting. That comes into real play later in the story after she gets her warrior name.
MeNobody14 (2013-04-26 20:18:41)I can't give this a good rating or bad, because:
A: I hate cat stories. I'm sorry, but they stink.
B: This story was actually pretty good. I don't love it but its better than most 'stories' in this forum.
Its pretty good, but you failed to mention that they are cats. They could easily be Wolves, [if you don't pay attention] or Foxes. Not everyone reads [insert cat series name here].
All in All its ok.
It's time for review, kiddo!
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I remember the day Blazestar got rid of me. Every cat was staring. I just put my head down and left camp.
But how did I become RainPOOL?
This is the story, the moment of truth.
I padded out of the camp, scowling, hoping to leave the disgusting NightClan scent behind. I kept walking, though, till I came to our scent border. I padded past it into unknown territory with no Clan scent. I sat down, tired, and then went to a bush to sleep. I tucked my nose under my paws and went to sleep.
I woke up, bland, hungry. I kept walking, though, and then after what seemed like a moon, I came to a large brown animal and yowled. "A bear!" almost immediately a Twoleg thing shot the bear. I bolted and ran right into a bush 20 tail-lengths away. I fell onto a mouse and purred "Easy catch." I ate the mouse and then began to walk again... until I came to a sweet scent, like honey and heather. I followed it to come to a sleek gray cat. "Who are y-you?" I stammered, and the cat turned, radiating her scent and also a leafy, watery one. "I am Graywing. Who are you?" I crouched. "My name is Rainpaw."
The scent that got stronger as I followed Graywing got stronger, and yet I had never tasted it before. Sweet like minty water, but bitter like holly leaf. I whispered "Graywing, where are we going?" Graywing looked back "DawnClan camp." I looked up, confused "DawnClan? All I know is NightClan, ThunderClan, RockClan and RiverClan!" I said, and Graywing mewed back "Here there is DawnClan, DuskClan, OceanClan, and MineralClan."
Sunstar padded out of her den, and then stopped in her tracks. Was that one of the forbidden Clan scents? She smelled again. Definitely. Smelled like NightClan. There was a silence as a blue-gray cat and Graywing padded into camp.
A red tabby with white paws and chest was watching me. Was that the leader? I didn't know. Almost immediately a blue-silver she-cat ran up to Graywing "Did you get any catmint for Moonpelt?" she asked. Graywing nodded and gave the cat the catmint. The cat bounded off to a small rock alcove.
Sunstar leaped onto the Startoucher, her deputy Skysilver and medicine cat Graywing following. "The one has come; the forbidden Clan warrior has finally come to us."
Chapter 2: Forbidden?
I woke up after a long sleep. The DawnClan apprentice had pushed himself to the farthest corner away from me. I shuddered. Was I that unwelcomed? Streampaw leaned over me. I jumped. So there were two? A medicine cat apprentice and a warrior apprentice, huh? Cool. I looked around and left the den. Oakstripe hissed at me. "No leaving. Need something? Ask me." I sighed and turned to him "Dirtplace, and fresh-kill. It's sunhigh. Don't you think Silverpaw should get up? " I hissed back.
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