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Blackroses ep.1 chpt.1
Started by Gamzee
(2013-03-17 12:46:15)
Gamzee (2013-03-17 12:46:15)

Life has it's Mistakes.....
People Regret these mistakes....
But no one regrets 1 mistake more than Taki Kurai(i created his name when i was like 10 lol 3 yrs ago)
--Chapter 1:the mistake of all mistakes--

Thunder had been crashing in the wide sky that night,It wass dark and raining seeming like an average night....
Inside the house of Akari Fujieta a terrible mistake was made,the mistake that Taki Kurai regrets and will regret for his whole life....
As Akari stands in shock with tears rolling from her right eye,blood drips from her left
Taki had bloodlust in his eyes,licking his lips he lowered is arm wich was covered in Akari's blood
Akari looked at Taki in fear and asked in a small,terrified tone"T-taki.....w-hy?w-hy couldn't y-you just.....j-ust....."She fell to the ground
Taki regained his sanity,looking at his arm then at sakura he panicked and fell to the ground to help Akari up
His eyes filled with tears Taki said to Akari"A-akari i-i diddn't mean it!"He could then hardly speak from his sobs of guilt and regret....
A nearby friend named Miki LaPonsie rushed in almost like he busted down the door"WHATS GOING ON!?"he paused when he saw the seen
Taki holding Akari in his arms holding her close crying,he passed out and later awakend in his home by Miki who had a bright smile on his face
Miki's Blue hair was a little messed up and he was wearing a Dark yellow hoodi and blue jeans with the knee's ripped, his Sun Charmed necklase hung down from his neck shining in the sunlight above Taki's head"Glad youre awake Taki!"He said in a happy town"Arevik is making breakfast downstairs!"
Taki shot up out of his bed"Wait!wheres Akari?!Is she alright!?"Taki was worried about Akari alot
Miki smiled at taki"don't worry she's fine"Taki looked down"i-it's just that....i....i..."Miki hugged taki"i said don't worry!she's gonna be fine!"He smiled again and released his hug from taki"now get dressed okay?"Mikki trotted out"Taki got up and got dressed and thought to himself"I need to get a better grip on my insanity....being a decendent of the InuYasha clan there's no telling what could happen if i completely lost my grip"Taki walked downstairs and ate breakfast with Miki and Arevik befor Preparing for School


End of Chapter 1 tell meh if u wanna read chapter 2!!!!X3

This post has been edited one or more times, the last time was:
2013-03-17 19:48:53


I paced around for hours on empty,
Jumped at the slightest of sounds.
I couldn't stand the person inside me,
I turned all the mirrors around.


 

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