tombstone (2013-03-09 05:59:54)

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One Day There Was A Man Named Richard Harnson He Wanted To Change The World In So Many Ways. He First Invented A Way That Changed The Way Of Time Travel but He didnt Tell Any1 He Wanted to see Gods First Creation So Thats where he traveld First He Saw Adam And Eve But Knowing History He Warned Them of eating of the Forbidden Fruit But then God Was mad And a Voice Thunderd Cause he Knew something was not right for he Knows all he told Richard that by changeing there mistake Hes has altered Gods Trust in his own Creation So The world The Sky and The Humans and Everything was No More Richard Greatist Invention Truned Out To be The Worst thing Ever Created For Man no Longer walk the earth and then the earth moon and the stars were no more. Comment Down below about what u think of my story

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AmayaTime8D (2013-03-11 06:33:29)

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Thisis horrible. I'm sorry, this is horrible. You need more learning of punctuation and spelling. And most of all, writing. This is the worst story ever. Disincluding the ones that weren't serious.

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