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Elemental Discord
Started by Tavros
(2013-02-24 21:38:04)
Tavros (2013-02-24 21:38:04)
Greybell trotted happily through ponyville. She opened her mouth and took in a long, soft breath of fresh air. It was a beautiful day. She wondered what she could do and walked around with her eyes closed, when she bumped into Twilight Sparkle.
" Ow! " The purple pony yelled.
" Oh, I'm so sorry! " The grey mare apologized, her red eyes filling with hurt. Her ears flattened against her pale red mane. " A-are you hurt?! " she stuttered.
" No, But thanks for asking " she muttered and a lavendar beam appeared from her horn to pick up the book she had knocked into the mud.

Greybell decided to take a walk in everfree forest. She had never been in there so, got lost. She lowered her head and walked with fear in her stance. Her hooves ached. Her legs ached. Her stumpy excuse for a tail ached. She just wanted to go home. She began to cry. She wished she was not just a good for nothing bullied blank-flank earthpony. She was hopeless. Until she found the temple of night mare moon.....

Greybell peeked inside. Wasn't this the place that the elements of harmony were? She wondered in until she saw her. Celestia. Dying on the floor.
" Princess Celestia are you alright? "
" I'm afraid not my little pony, I was attacked by Discord. I defeated him but took injuries myself, Greybell- " she wheezed. " Don't worry- " She dropped off at the end of her sentence. She was dead.

Greybell froze with shock. What just happened and how? That was the least of her problems, because Celestia's body began to shine with a brilliant white light that surrounded Greybell and engulfed her. The pain flashed and seered through her body. She screamed and the pain ceased. So did the light.

Greybell woke up. She felt different. She strecthed out her long legs and fluttered her wings. She yawned. She caught a glimpse of her long flowing pale red mane, kinda like Celestia has. She sneezed. It echoed throught the halls of the old crumbling palace. She sneezed so hard her crown fell off.
TBC,...

This post has been edited one or more times, the last time was:
2013-02-25 07:14:25

Dear Tavros, show
You are the best morail anyone could have, and if anyone says different... Grimaldo and I shall defend. ~Eridan
Tavros (2013-02-25 07:14:51)
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Dear Tavros, show
You are the best morail anyone could have, and if anyone says different... Grimaldo and I shall defend. ~Eridan
 

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