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Blazestar's secret (4)
Started by SongBlaze
(2013-02-20 22:33:05)
SongBlaze (2013-02-20 22:33:05)
*recap* blazestar declared battle against all the clans. the warriors of nightclan head to the other clan's territories while the clan leader searched for her rival; sparkstar. the spirits of both cats were revealed and they fight to the last life. blazestar is laid wounded by an electrical shock from sparkstar's spirit.


Chapter 4~
blazestar laid lifeless and sparkstar gladly prepared to leave for her camp, just then the orange she-cat bolted awake. she had lost a life. her blood stopped trickling down her flank and she rose to her paws, quiet to not let her rival know. taking off, blazestar still felt the tiger's spirit coming from her. *i am her with you blazestar, don't give up* she herd the spirit's voice and sped up as she formed a feline fire ball of herself and sent sparkstar flying even higher in the air and disappeared for a moment.

a flash shined in the sky. for a moment, the nightclan leader though it was the first star of starclan that had appeared for the rising night. but she was wrong. The light grew larger and she realized an electric ball was swarming towards her.creating a fiery shield around herself, blazestar blocked the attack just by a heartbeat. *fight blazestar!* the spirit's voice rung. *show sparkstar a lesson!* he hissed.

the flaming she-cat intersected sparkstar's attack and flew up into the sky and threw a fiery paw blow onto the yellow tom's muzzle. the swipe stung more then normal. his muzzle burned and turned a smoky black. the yellow tom grew weak and blazestar pushed the blizzardlcan leader to the ground and a huge boom rang through the forest. thunder was created once again and struck the ground forming fire now. the clouds circled the clan leaders. both cats eyes were in slits and hissed furiously at each other as blazestar pinned sparkstar down. fire and lightning surrounded the cats. the heat of battle was ringing through her ears. the nightclan leader set her claws on sparkstar's throat and threatened to dig her claws into him.
"admit defeat and confess that you broke starclan's code of the gathering!" she hissed.
the yellow cat hissed nastily and spoke.
"all i wish is for peace. a cat like you would never understand" he snarled.
"i will give you peace only if you admit and confess!" she hiss with her lips curled back. she pressured her paw onto sparkstar's chest ready to kill in any heartbeat.
Lightning struck again and created more fire throughout the forest. she thought about her clanmate's safety for a moment but the gave her attention to her enemy.
"i admit defeat." he meowed, resting his muscles, but blazestar kept her paw on his throat, knowing that he could have a dirty trick up sleeve fur.
"and?" the red she cat continued.
"i have broken starclan's code" she hissed.
silently, she let go of the tom and kept her eye on the yellow cat. slowly, he limped away but blazestars cold blue eyes never left the tom until he was out of site. "you were lucky i showed mercy today!" she called fiercely knowing that the tom had surely herd. she turned her head to the nightclan territory.
*you showed mercy to the cat...I see that you are truly a nightclan leader* the tiger spoke proudly. "he wont see mercy from me again" she assured her spirit, with a anger still boiling inside of her. as she padded into a shade of a tree, her spirit seemed to fad away from her as she realized that her body felt cooer and she had no fire in her body. she wondered if the spirit had gone away forever. *no, i need you!* she thought, starting to grow worried.
*i am with you, blazestar, i always will be till your last life* his voiced boomed in her mind that seemed to comfort her.
*promise me you will never tell your clanmates about me, for you are given my life as a reason.*
"i promise spirit. I promise i will keep my secret..."

THE END~

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Ilurv (2013-02-21 04:22:19)
LAWLZ, u just told everyone the secret. (but I'll keep it secret, DONT WORRY, CRY.) Nice job by the way!
Kiba (2013-02-21 20:01:23)
Wow
Ii am 2ollux captor
SongBlaze (2013-02-21 22:53:30)
lol it's just a story. i dont really have a tiger's spirit...
i only will rp like this with leaders so dont expect me to let you see my tiger's spirit cus you can't LOL

Fun fact: did you know that this was exactly how me and sparkstar fought when we PMed? well, i few changes but overall it was the same plot.

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SongBlaze (2013-02-21 22:57:22)
i noticed that i worte lots of "she's" to describe sparkstar. sparkstar is a tom. sorry for the typos.

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