Kiba (2013-02-12 10:37:53)

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This is the one of my past creepypastas compleatly re-formated and edited

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Kiba (2013-02-20 15:06:17)

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Sandpelt
Prolouge

It was a gloomy night for a newleaf gathering. The sun was just about over the Nightclan boundray when a rough tackled Blazestar. A fight breaks out and terrified yowls are heard from Crowfire and Whitestream. Blazestar falls, wounded. Too stunned to move, she lays victim to the rough. Badly bleeding, the cats of silverpelt swarming around her, her eyes slowly close. Sandpelt attacks the rough, joined by Crowfire and the rest of the bewildered members of Nightclan. Sandpelt realizes that Blazestar is losing a life, breaking from the battle, he hauls the unconsciousness leader onto his back and brings her to her den. As he stands guard, Crowfire comes to report the wolf is gone. Crowfrost comes to wait for Blazestars recovery with sandpelt, ready to treat any injuries from the battle. Sandpelt paces around the den nervously, Crowfrost trying to Comfort him. Musterclaw walks towards the den,claws unsheathed, I was asked to keep watch he mewed. Whitestream walks in and tells him he should get some sleep as she was sending Her sister to get herbs for Blazestar. Musterclaw bows his head and pads wearily to his den. Blazestar stirs and tries to rise, but is urged down by Crowfrost, who insisted the shaken leader must rest. But what about the gathering, the red she cat insisted. Don't worry about it the other leaders wil understad. No she yowls, I will go to the gathering lost life and all. I'm sorry but you'll have to get past me first, Sandpelt said blocking the den exit. Sandpelt, move she meowed angry. The she cat rises but is unstable and leans on Crowfrost for support. Great star clan I haven't felt like this since I got greencough as an apprentice she said sinking to the den floor. Great star clan Blazestar its greencough Sandpelt, cried devasteated.

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2013-02-20 15:18:21

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Kiba (2013-02-21 15:22:04)

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Chapter 1
Just then, silverstar struts into the camp flanked by the dusk patrol. How dare you strut into our camp Blazestar hisses angrily lunging at the Iceclan leader. Woah exclaimed Sandpelt and Crowfrost holding the red she-cat back! Here, eat these herbs Juilliamouse said, pushing thyme towards the angry leader. Blazestar refueses to eat the herbs and continues struggling to free herself from the cats grasp. Thunder rolls and lightning flashes as the two she-cat glare at each other. See what youve done now, hisses Sandpelt, Starclan is angry!! A bolt of lightning strikes the tree above the Iceclan leaders head, splitting it in half. Only Munsterclaw sees it. Watch out he yowls tackling the she-cat out of the way. The tree comes down crushing Munsterclaw. H-h-he saved me the Iceclan leader said shaikily. GET OUT yowls Blazestar breaking free and pelting after the fleeing Iceclan leader. Meanwhile Jilliamouse is over checking Musterclaw. Hes still alive, but just barley the black she-cat mewed. I feel your pain said Sandpelt licking between the grief striken leaders ears. How can you feel my pain Blazestar cried, have you ever lost someone close to you? Sandpelt bolts from the camp on the verge of tears.

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2013-02-21 15:22:39

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