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"Him"

Started by AmayaTime8D
(2012-12-23 23:43:00)

AmayaTime8D (2012-12-23 23:43:00)

I made this. Please tell me if it needs editing and tell me what it needs.
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A journal was found on a table in an old house which had a girl named Marina who once lived there who was murdered by some creature. Police officers read the journal and were shocked. Here is what the journal had read.
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Friday, July 13, 2003
Dear Journal,
I am in my bed. I hear scratching on the wall. My parents have to stay at work, as doctors, because one patient has a very severe case of Asthma, which is attacking that patient very much. I am 32, old enough to stay home alone, which happens a lot since I am an only child. I can't go to sleep. That scratching is so loud, it's keeping me awake.
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Saturday, July 14, 2003
The scratching got worse. It sounds like some monster. I'm going to check.

Nothing's there. I guess it's in the walls.
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Sunday, July 15, 2003
I feel sick and bloated. Maybe it's that thing, no, ghosts aren't real. I'm going to leave a camera up running all night to see if he comes. I don't think he will.
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Monday, July 16, 2003
I woke up and when I got out of bed, I saw my camera on the floor. It still has the video but I didn't have time to watch it, I had work. I am going to watch it now.

Oh my gosh. I watched the video. It was... horrifying. I watched the video, and fast forwarded till I saw something out of place. This took about an hour and thirty minutes. That's when I saw it. He was freaky, he was in a weird position. Like he had no bones. He looked naked, and bald. His eyes were red, he had no pupil. Just red. It was scary. He never spoke or anything.
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Tuesday, July 17, 2003
I was awoken by scratching. As soon as I opened my eyes, the scratching stopped. I sat up. and I was horrified. On the wall, in black liquid of some sort, said, "I am 'Him'." I called the police and they saw the words. They told me to leave the house. I agreed and called my daughter, who was married, and asked her if she had an extra bed. She agreed and I began to pack my stuff. I am in her house right now.
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Wednesday, July 18, 2003
I have started cutting myself. I don't know why. I am forced to. I can't go a day without cutting.
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Thursday, July 19, 2003
It's him.
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Friday, July 20, 2003.
I am possessed.
HIM.
HAH
HIM
HE'LL GET TO YOU SOON
DON'T LOOK BEHIND YOU
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Journal ends here.
Police say to PLEASE DON'T LOOK BEHIND YOU.