RinFujimaru (2012-09-13 01:27:32)

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A boy around 17 years-old woke one morning. He was tired and sweating from a nightmare about his child-hood. But that was the past.
The boy's name was Aaron,and he was a cool guy. Aaron was natrually very attractive and handsome,and most of the girls (who were all cute) had huge crushes on him or were in love hard-core(You don't even wanna know what his mail-box looks like on Valentine's day).
Aaron's eyes were blue and beautifully changed color as they go up and down. The top is light-sky-like-blue,the middle is shady,and the real bottom is a dark blue like the ocean type of dark blue. Aaron had nice brown hair,and is very muscular. And he was also about 5 foot 11.
Aaron put on his shirt and walked out into the hallway of his facility traing-base.
Since the Mortals,or in a more simple way,the humans,were at war with Immortals,they set up bases,facilities,forts,etc. for training and military storage of soldiers. Aaron is one of the most powerful humans on Earth,but you'll find out why in later episodes.
Aaron went to the dinning hall for breakfast. As he walked in,he heard a group of really cute girls talking about him.
"He's so cute,hehehe! I hope he's a security guard,'cause he can check my hot-bod' all he wants!" Said one girl.
One of the hotter ones bit her nail. "I wish he'd notice me,though. He doesn't hang out with any of the girls." She said desperately.
Aaron blushed a bit at the 2nd girl,but the 1st girl was just plain gross.
Suddenly,some pancakes slipped in-front of him.
"Just for you,man!" Said a familiar male voice.
"Ha,thanks Devin!" Said Aaron in reply.
So,Aaron's best-friend, Devin,was pretty cool too. He had white hair,red deep eyes,and had a muscular figure and was about 6 feet tall.
Devin also had a huge axe in his back, and 2 daggers in a holster around his hips.
Aaron and Devin began eating,delightfully satisfied.
"Great breaky." Said Devin.
"Breaky? Seriously? Sounds like a children's word."
"Shut yo' mouth,son!" Devin whacked him upside the head and the two began wrestling around and breaking mugs over each-other's head.
Eventually they both fainted,and the group of girls saw. They began to get some naughty ideas. They slowly walked over to the two guys,but then a huge horn-sound blew.
The boys woke up instantly and were alert.
"Trouble." Said Aaron.
"Time to kick some Immortal a-*BOOUUUH*" The horn blew once again before Devin finished the his sentence.
Soon,every perspn was hurrying to the armory to gear up.
Aaron equipped his legendary blade; The Lethal blade. It's God fury-like power -s un-touchable,and it not even gods can break it. It was made so the mortal soul is able to stay on the same level with Gods and other Immortals.
Devin took out his axe,and them and hundreds of others rushed to the battle-field.
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The battle is on,and this is only part 1. Did you guys like it? Plz rate and subscribe! Thanks for reading,& Stay tuned for part 2!!!

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2012-09-13 01:29:30

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kblackeagle (2012-09-13 01:30:39)

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*Staying tuned* Great story. Captivating, even at the start.

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RinFujimaru (2012-09-13 01:37:57)

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Part 2 should be out in atleast 2 days. I'll try to post about 2-4 parts a week,but I've got school and ALOT of homework. So I may not get alot of parts uploaded.

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kblackeagle (2012-09-13 02:05:02)

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I'm patient. I can wait.

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RinFujimaru (2012-09-13 21:15:45)

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Part 2 is out now!

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