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little5 (2014-10-04 04:09:22)"Phycic"
You don't know how much this misspell bothered me. e-e
Psychic*
AntiChrist (2014-10-04 11:59:12)The reason the chapters are short now is because I have to type this on a 3ds until I get my phone back on sunday. All the chapters I've posted so far have taken me ten to fifeteen minutes to type. Also, don't worry about not getting enough lines. Everyone will have tons of them.
AntiChrist (2014-10-04 13:44:32)Chapter 6:
Drakkai took AntiChrist, Pheonix and kishy into the tower and led them down some stairs.
"Where is he taking us?"
thought pheonix. Able to hear his thoughts, I sent him a message using telepathy.
"We are going to be assigned job options."
pheonix fell down the stairs.
"JESUS CHRIST DUDE! That scared the hell out of me."
Drakkai looked around confused.
"Huh? What happened."
"Anti is probably using telepathy again. "
Said kishy
"being able to read minds is pretty fun."
I said. Whenever I spoke to people from inside their minds, they would usually jump and look around. Sometimes I would make the loudest noise I can think of suddenly pop into pheonixs head just to mess with him. We had become fed up with each other, thanks to kishy making us rivals when it came to which one of us kishy loved more. Of course, it was just her attract power messing with us. We had still been under its control even after two months.
Drakkai hopped over to a door with a key in his hand. Being a mudkip, he was too small to get the key into the lock that was way above him. I used phsycic on the key to put it in and turn it.
"Thanks."
said Drakkai. Everyone was led into a room with large windows that you could see the walls from. Other people who were new to the state were lined up among the walls, waiting for instructions.
"You guys are lucky. You get to meet President Dedenne himself. He's a really scary guys though, so don't piss him off ok?"
said Drakkai
A few moments later, a small Dedenne hoped into the room.
"ALRIGHT, LISTEN UP!"
It said in a manly voice. Hearing that come out ofsuch a small and cute looking pokemon made most of the room bust out into laughter. Vanes started the show on the dedennes' forehead.
A gigantic bolt of lightning came out of dedenne and crashed infront of everyone. The laughter stopped emmidiately.
"Now, I expect that you give me your undivided attention. Yes, this state is a democracy... However, not everything will be perfect for everyone. You guys will be assigned jobs based on your egg group, and based on your powers. Don't like your options? WE DON'T GIVE A RATICATES ASS! You can get the hell out of these walls and find another safe place where everyone can live in harmony if you like, but we aren't going to be making acceptions here. You will be assigned job options that you may or may not like. Do you think we give a damn about your opinion? We busting our asses out here, building a damn government from scratch and gradually building a structured and organised society where everyone has safety, a home and food on their plates as long as they contribute. Do you think its easy creating this place and keeping everything under control? Think about that before you go protesting about how this place isn't enough like the old 3dsplaza. In fact, IT ISN'T SUPPOSED TO BE THAT WAY IN THE SLIGHTEST! For some reason, nobody who first comes here can get that through their thick ass heads!"
Dedenne continued his rant spedch for a good thirty minutes. He went on to complain about the people who claimed that the higher ranks in the state "weren't doing their job" when in fact, they were, but it just wasn't so simple running an entire state and responding to every one of the complaints made by citizens. He ranted about people who he had to kick out of the state for refusing to listen to the rules of it, who ended up attacking it because they thought the rules were "unfair".
What I learned about this place was that in almost everyones mind, the rules were supposed to be exactly the same here as in the old 3dsplaza. Those people thought that they didn't have to listen to rules they didn't like, and when they were punished, they called the system "corrupt". When people broke they rules, they were detained and had two options.
A: they could go to the prison for as long as they had to.
B: they could leave the state and never be allowed inside the walls again. They would have to survive on their own.
New citizens failed to realize how much was being provided for them. The ones who were ungrateful who ended up having to leaves the walls, often came back and begged for the higher ups to let them back in. However, there was a rule that once you were kicked out, you could not ever return.
It was obvious why Dedenne was so frustrated and that he was making it as clear as possible that if you didn't like the system and the way it worked, you better get the hell out of these walls or stop complaining. Everyone seemed intimidated by Dedenne. They stayed quiet the whole time he was talking.
"Now, we will begin assigning you your job options, but first...."
he turned to victor.
"As me what happens if you don't like your options, Victor."
Victor smiled
"What if we don't like our options?"
said victor.
"Then leave."
While everyone was being assigned jobs, Victor went into his office.
( ran out of room, have to continue in another post)
AntiChrist (2014-10-04 14:09:55)( still chapter 6. continued )
Victor walked into his office and sat down. It was really dark in there, except for the light of the fire place. He sat for a while, then stood up.
"I know you are there."
said victor. Carlos11 walked out from the shadowy corner, like a badass.
"How did you get in here.... no... how did you even get inside the walls without being noticed?. "
Asked Victor
"Do you have high authority here?"
said carlos11.
"Sort of... not exactly. I was one of the founders of this place, but as of now, I lead the police force here. "
"Has any past moderators of 3dsplaza come here?"
asked carlos11
"Irrelevant. Weather or not you were a moderator has nothing to do with your position here. Unlike the old 3dsplaza, being a goody two shoes that's well known will not give you any power here. Working hard will."
"Yes, but have you not noticed the pattern with the 6 perfect iv beast that's been running around?"
"The golurk? What pattern?"
"I've noticed that all his attacks happen where a former moderator is. It always results in the death of said moderator. If one is here, will you be prepared if this guy attacks? "
Victor thought about it for a moment.
"Meia is here, but I doupt the golurk will know where she is."
said Victor.
"Are you sure about that? With his strange ability to be everywhere at once, and the fact that he seemed so determined to smash those eggs that contained robdeprop, someluigi and SackThing101, but disregarded everyone else who attacked him as if he knew the significance of the eggs, AND considering the fact that everyone has supernatural powers, it isn't irrational to assume that he could somehow know where each of the moderators are. "
said carlos11
"Well, you aren't wrong. However, even if he does know where meia is, we practically have a military here. There's no need to be afraid of one pokemon alone. "
said victor
"I've witnessed the golurks power myself. A pokemon with all six perfect IVs is not something you should underrestimate. He was completely unphazed by every attack thrown at him, and he knocked me flat on my ass. This jackass feels no remorse and kills without a second thought. "
"I understand. I'll see if we can arrange a meeting with Dedenne and discuss this issue. He is pretty strong himself. He can help."
to be continued...
carlos11 (2014-10-04 19:46:18)I want a Golurk now.
Language is a tool for efficient communication. The internet is a tool for fast communication. Do not defy both intents by posting incoherent writing.
little5 (2014-10-04 22:26:47)I have a Golurk after me, an unevolved Eevee.
Oh
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AntiChrist (2014-10-05 18:19:19)Chapter 7:
Me, pheonix and kishy decided to join the police force. Dimentia was giving us a tour of the work station. We were led into the cells which were each very very small and had no bars keeping those in custody from getting out. Each cell was about the size of a pantry that you'd see in a typical kitchen.
"As you can see, each of these cells have no bars or anything, yet the ones who are captured can't get out. That's because one of the job options for every ghost type pokemon is to stay in a cell with one criminal and use the move meanlook on him or her while staying inside the cell. This keeps every criminal from being able to escape. When the admims were killed, everyone with moderator privelages lost the ability to ban people. The best we can do now is keep them contained.
The ones who use meanlook to keep the criminals stuck here usually stay with them for two hours at a time then switch places with another person who knows mean look so that they can take a break. We also keep pokemon with the moves like disable, sleep poweder, or anything else helpful without being destructive nearby incase one of our ghost types get attacked. For some criminals who keep acting up, we have no choice but to repeatedly use confuze ray and hypnosis on them. This has been causing a bit of controversy lately as it has been called 'cruel', especially for those facing life in prison. Sometimes we end up sending criminals back outside the walls and they end up getting killed by the state military when they come back. We already give them enough chances to go free, so I don't personally consider it unethical.
Moving on..."
Dimentia led us into a room full of bleachers and a variety of battle terrains.
"This is where most of the training takes place. People on their breaks often come here to battle each other. "
On one of the battlefields, pokemonbro and nutsy were battling.
"Is that... Nutsy?"
Said pheonix
"Oh yeah, we started a fight with him once."
I said. Poke used double team and ran in all directions. Nutsy was slicing most of the fake pokes into pieces using slash and metal claw, when the real pokemonbro used shadow ball on him from behind. Nutsy was pushed back a few feet. He quickly got back up, but pokemonbro had already used shadowball a second time. With little time to think, nutsy used focus punch of the shadow ball and it went back over to poke too fast for him to dodge it. Poke wasn't done yet. He still got back up and ran towards nutsy while using agility.
"Wow, they must have been training a lot."
Said pheonix
"Correct. Poke has been raising his sp defense and hp stats pretty high. He can take quite a few hits. "
Said Dimentia. Poke used night slash and Nutsy used giga impact at the same time. Both collided into eachother and made a really cool explosion. Both Nutsy and Poke were still staying strong, but were almost completely out of energy. Suddenly, the referee blew his whistle.
"Times up! It's a draw!"
Said the reff
"Well, back to work."
Said Nutsy. After the tour, I was given a tazer and some guns to use since I still was pretty weak. Kishy was told that the move "attract" was now illegal and I was finally freed from her control, as well as pheonix. While I was wandering outside in the market area, waiting for further instructions, I saw president dedenne followed by a huge crowd of pokemon. Dedenne, being in charge wass clearly pretty famous in the area. The large crowd of suckups surrounded him.
"Move."
He demanded. Everyone immediately vacated his path. Despite his size, everyone feared him. I tried reading his mind, but I couldn't hear anything. He seemed pretty focused on getting to the tower. I also felt a gigantic amount of power coming from him. I wondered exactly how powerful he was.
Meanwhile, inside the tower, dedenne, Meia, victor and carlos11 sat at a long table.
"What is it that you wanted to discuss?"
Said dedenne.
"Am I in trouble?"
Said Meia
"Yes, you are. But not with us."
Said victor
After explaining the situation, Meia offered to leave the walls so that nobody would get hurt.
"That won't be necessary, Eevee. We have a large variety of pokemon here. At least one strategy we have should work against even a pokemon with six perfect IVs. "
Said Dedenne.
"You do huh? If that's the case, then here's an idea...."
Said carlos11
To be continued
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HanShotFirst (2014-10-06 01:11:37)>"Am I in trouble?"
>"Yes you are. But not with us."
That sounds like me.
Taka! Kujata! Condor! Tajadol~!
Nutsy (2014-10-06 02:08:18)Can anyone learn Sheer Cold or Fissure?
But we don't want to take the cheap way out, do we?
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Damn, you must like write. This chapter felt short.
BECAUSE I ONLY HAD ONE LINE.But, could you make the chapters longer?