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Started by MeNobody14
(2013-05-02 01:37:58)
MeNobody14 (2013-05-09 08:54:25)
Im a geenyus! Wewhew!

Thanks "Ma'am".
It's time for review, kiddo!
kblackeagle (2013-05-09 09:09:50)
I wonder what Jerry will become... (Jerry, Joker... nah!)
Death is not the end. It is merely a step towards the unknown.
MeNobody14 (2013-05-09 09:14:48)
You'll find out.

Spoiler!

He doesn't become a "monster." Sorry, but I didn't wanna get your hopes up.
It's time for review, kiddo!
kblackeagle (2013-05-09 09:19:58)
Joker isn't a monster...
Death is not the end. It is merely a step towards the unknown.
MeNobody14 (2013-05-09 09:20:44)
Inauguration day.

He wore jeans and a white Tee-shirt. He told Angela to hold onto his jacket. He stood outside the doors. Waiting for the horns to sound. "You'll be fine." Angela said.

Horns.

He opened the massive doors and walked forward. Striding past the crowd of creepypastas. He was about to be King! Wow!. He walked up the steps where his aunt and a few servants were waiting. Keep calm.. He thought. He reached the top step and turned around. Facing the crowd. The former queen announced it. "This, Is your new king!" She said. A girl walked through the doors, carrying a pillow with a crown on it. She reached them and handed the crown to the queen, And the queen held it up. "Hail, Jeremiah! King of Creepypastas!" She said. Somehow, that sounded funny to him. She placed the crown on his head and everyone cheered. He felt.. Normal. Nothing happened. He felt fine. He smiled and cheered aswell. Then he got a sick feeling, like something was gonna happen.

And something did.

A knife flew out of the crowd. Jerry ducked, and it landed in the throne. The crowd gasped and looked around. Then, something fell on-top of him. He pushed it off and saw it was The girl. "Get back!" He said to Alexandria. She moved away, and tried to keep the crowds back, giving Jerry room.

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2013-05-09 16:36:32

It's time for review, kiddo!
kblackeagle (2013-05-09 10:36:09)
Bum bum bum!
Death is not the end. It is merely a step towards the unknown.
MeNobody14 (2013-05-10 10:37:40)
He kicked her down the steps, and she launched back up them. She clawed at his face, and eventually re-opened his scars. She tripped him and kicked him in the stomach. He gasped for breath and tried to get up. The girl never said anything. She just growled. When he finally managed to get up, he stood still. He held his hand out with one finger in a "Gimme a sec.." pose. With his other hand, he reached behind himself, and his jacket flew into it. He slipped it on, and stood still again. The girl growled and started lashing out at him. She did this for ten minutes while he stood still, poker faced. The blood was dripping down his face and onto his jacket, and he finally head enough. His anger went out of control. He grabbed her by the throat and squeezed. His eyes turned to balls of flame, and he stared at her. She gazed at him curiously. She wasn't groping for her throat. She wasn't wide eyed with fear. That is, until he pulled out her photograph. In it She held up four fingers. "This, is you." He said, eyes burning. She then started clwaing at his arm and trying to break free. He lifted her off the ground and through her into a column. She slumped to the floor.

Another knife flew out of the crowd, and this time, Jerry caught it. "Come on out, Jeff." He said. He came out of the crowd and up the steps. "I am your king." Jerry said. Jeff laughed. "King of chickens." He said. He whipped out a knife and plunged it into Jerry's stomach. Jerry gasped and clutched his stomach. He gasped again, and punched Jeff in the face so hard, a few teeth flew out. "You lunatics never learn." He said. He nudged the unconscious body down the steps. "Does anyone else want to challenge my right to the throne?" He asked.

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2013-07-26 08:17:06

It's time for review, kiddo!
MeNobody14 (2013-05-11 02:57:36)
Another thing stepped out of the crowd. Everyone stayed silent. "I challenge you." Its deep voice resonated throughout the room. "And who are you?" Jerry asked. "Mynor, My liege." He mocked and bowed. "Minor? Never heard of you before." Jerry joked. "That is good." He said. He appeared right behind Jerry. "Then you didn't know I could do that." Jerry reached behind himself and hurled the thing down the steps. His hands burst into flames. "Impressive." Jerry said. Jerry teleported behind Mynor. "What else can you do?" He asked. "This." Mynor became a shadow. He blended in with all the others. Jerry wiped his feet on Mynor's shadow. "A new door mat. Perfect!" He said.

Someone from the crowd made the comment that Jerry was "Walking all over the competition." Mynor returned and turned blue. "I will freeze you with fear!" He yelled. Jerry simply touched Mynor, and Mynor yelped. "Fire melts ice." He said.

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2013-07-26 08:18:35

It's time for review, kiddo!
MeNobody14 (2013-05-11 06:13:34)
Thanks!

Mynor finally backed away, and Alexandria called it to a close. Jerry went to his room, and lay on his bed. Thinking. King.. I didn't ask for this.. He realized his hands and eyes were still on fire, and that he had set the sheets on fire. He doused them quickly and coughed. Why are my hands burning? He wondered. Angela walked in and bounced around. "That was sooo cool!" She exclaimed. He sat on the bed, trying to extinguisher his hands and eyes. "Wow. You look so hot!" Angela said as she batted her eyelashes. "Very funny." Jerry responded. "Do you think it'll be permanent?" He asked. "Naw." Angie said. He rubbed his hands together, he shook them, he clapped them, he stuck them in water, (which only extinguished his hands as long as they stayed in the water) He tried everything.

"Why won't they go out?" He asked. "Maybe your mad. Like the hulk or something.." Angela said. He thought about what he might be mad about.

Not the people that challenged him, he had fun beating the crap out of 'em. He wasn't mad at Angela or Rebecka. "What am I mad at?" He thought aloud.

Alexandria

She had kidnapped him.
She had tortured his friends.
She had forced him into the throne.

His flames grew brighter. "Calm down!" Angela said. She tackled him and pushed him onto the bed. "No, little pet." She said. He pushed her off and she yelped. The front of her shirt was singed, exposing her stomach. "Hey!" She said. "Sorry.." Jerry responded.

Rebecka walked in and saw his blazing hands. "Still not out yet?" She asked. "Well duh." Jerry said.

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2013-05-11 14:20:20

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-11 07:23:10)
He ran his hands through his hair, exasperated. His hair started blazing. Just like his hands. "I'm turning into a fireball.." He said. Alexandria walked in. Too many girls.. He thought. "Sorry." Alexandria said. He hated her. His aunt. She was the cause of his problems. The flames grew brighter as he glared at her. "What's bothering you?" She asked. "You." He said flatly. "I'm sorry." Alexandria thought for a moment, and then said: "Your mad at me for bringing you here, aren't you?" She asked. His arms started blazing. "Yes." He said. "I'm sorry for doing this to you." She said.

Sure you are.. He thought. "I am." She said. "Then why bring me here in the first place? Why do it if you'd just regret it?" He asked. "Because if you didn't assume the throne, Mynor would." She said. "Oh.." All at once, his flames extinguished. "I'll leave you alone.." Alexandria said and left. "I'm gonna tweak the Grav-suit." Rebecka said as she left. "Looks like its just you and me!" Angela said. She pulled him off the bed and kissed him. "Wanna dance?" She asked. "Umm..." Jerry stuttered. "It's okay if you don't want to." She said. "I'll sit out, if you don't mind." He said. "Alright, my liege." Angela laughed and bowed. Jerry blushed and sat on the bed. He watched her dance around the room, and smiled. She seems so happy.. So why aren't I?

He fell asleep awhile later, and had a strange dream.

He was in a house, with Rebecka. She was eating a cookie, and he was talking to her. He laughed at something, and Rebecka's expression grew strangly alert. She looked toward the door, and a guy stepped through. Rebecka told him to run for the forest, and to not look back. The last thing he saw was Rebecka, holding out her hand to him, clutching the other one to her chest. Mouth open in a silent scream.

He woke up sweating and gasping. He woke Angela up as well. "Something wrong?" She sat up and asked. He couldn't answer. He was still trying to grasp what happened in his nightmare. "Your drenched in sweat!" Angela exclaimed. He still didn't answer.

Rebecka.. He thought. He looked over at the couch, where she was sleeping. She was there. A pleasant expression on her face. He still couldn't grasp what he'd seen. Angela pulled his jacket off, and his shirt, and led him to the bathroom. He was still stunned and didn't know what was happening. Angela sat him in the shower and blasted him with freezing water. He immediately awoke from his trance. "What.. Who.." He wasn't quite awake. "Are you okay?" Angela asked. "Yeah.. I'm fine.." He said. "Okay.." Angela responded. She took him back to bed and they fell asleep together.

The next day, they were leaving for home. Alexandria was going to watch over the dimension while Jerry was away. His mother wished him farewell. "Goodbye mom. I'll see you again soon." He said. They stepped through a portal, and appeared inside a home. It was a small home. Furnished and fresh. "This is our home." Rebecka said. "Cool." He said. Angela didn't appear, and Jerry asked why. "She's at CSA's headquarters." Rebecka responded. "Alright. Wheres my room?" He asked.

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2013-05-11 15:49:03

It's time for review, kiddo!
kblackeagle (2013-05-11 09:41:55)
Wow. He seems like my RP character...except that he isn't the Devil's son.
Death is not the end. It is merely a step towards the unknown.
MeNobody14 (2013-05-11 10:40:25)
He awoke the next morning, to the smiling face of Rebecka. "Time for school!" She said. School..? He thought. He got up, already dressed in his usual outfit. Blue jeans and Blue hoodie. "Let's go.." He said.

He arrived at 7:00 AM. Right on time. He walked in, and asked the Superintendent where his locker was. The man directed him to locker 402, and he gave Jerry the passcode. Jerry found his locker and opened it. Empty.. He thought. He put his backpack in there and closed the locker. He turned around and gulped. So many people.. He thought. He made it to his first class early, and sat in the back. The next person to arrive was a short kid with thick glasses. He looked smart, not geeky. "You must be new here." He said. "Yeah." Jerry replied. The kid sat down at the desk next to his and held out his hand to shake. "My name is Mark." He said. Jerry shook it. "Jeremiah. But most people call me Jerry." People started walking in for class, and it started. Jerry didn't pay much attention, and he was never called on. His thoughts were on other things.

He made it through math, spelling, grammer, english, vocab, and history easily. He returned to his locker to retrieve his backpack. He opened it, and a sticky note was inside.

".dnuora nruT"

Turn around? He did, and saw nothing out of the ordinary. He picked up his backpack and shut the locker. Whatever.. He thought. He walked outside the school and took a seat in the back. A tall girl sat next to him. He ignored her and glanced out the window. He thought he saw a strange bird on the lawn, but when he looked closer, there was nothing there. "Hey." The girl said. He looked over at her, she had black hair with a few red highlights, a lot of eyeshadow, and pale skin. "Hi." He said, he held out his hand for her to shake. "Your name is Jerry, right?" She asked. "Yeah.. Why?" He asked her. "My name is Jane." She said.

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2013-05-12 07:30:38

It's time for review, kiddo!
MeNobody14 (2013-05-12 00:35:00)
Bamp. -b
It's time for review, kiddo!
MeNobody14 (2013-05-12 06:52:06)
Jane...

He'd heard that name before, but he couldn't figure out where. "Cool." He said. He noticed a knife in her boot. "Knife? What's that for?" He asked. "My dad was in the military." She replied. "Oh.." Jerry said.

The rest of the bus ride home was quiet, and he was glad to get off the bus. "Becka, I'm home!" He called as he opened the door. She walked out of the kitchen and hugged him. "How was your first day?" She asked. "Fine." He said. "There's cookies in the kitchen." She said. "Thanks." He replied. He went to his room and set his backpack down. He then walked to the kitchen and sat at the table. He simply stared at the cookies. "You gonna eat one?" Rebecka asked as she walked back in. "No.." He said. She sat down across from him and grabbed a cookie. "They aren't poisoned." She said. He laughed and picked one up. He was about to bite when there was a knock on the door. Rebecka became serious and perked up at the sound.

Thunk Thunk Thunk.

It was louder this time. "Jerry, listen to me." Rebecka said. This isn't happening.. He thought desperately. "Run for the forest. Run hard, and don't look back." She said. "But.." He started to protest. "Go!" She said. He dashed out the back door, just as the front door burst open. The same blue figure from his dream was there. He ran, and the last thing he saw was Rebecka. Frozen. Arm outstretched toward him.

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2013-05-12 14:14:32

It's time for review, kiddo!
kblackeagle (2013-05-12 09:43:33)
Déjà vu! This is really good!
Death is not the end. It is merely a step towards the unknown.
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