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Bean (2014-04-11 21:43:19)Part 2: Ralts teleports in!
On Route 3
Youngster: GO! METAPOD! USE HARDEN!
5 minutes later...
Bean: Froakie, use bubble!
Youngster: HARDEN!
Froakie: FROAK! *Flinches*
*A mysterious Pokemon cancels the attack*
Bean: Huh? A Ralts?
*Ralts throws a CD-like thing away, then uses Shadow Ball*
Youngster: That thing can use TMs without a trainer?
Bean: HUH?! Froakie, watch out! RETURN.
*Ralts uses Shadow Ball*
*Froakie goes back in his Poke Ball*
Judo: Don't worry. Go, Pidgey!
Pidgey: Pidge-
*Ralts uses Dazzling Gleam*
*Pidgey faints*
Judo: Oh crap.
Bean: There's only one thing I can do. Go, Froakie. *Throws Poke Ball, letting Froakie out again* Use bubble!
Ralts: *Hit by bubble* Ra-lts...
Bean: *Throws a Poke Ball*
Ralts: *Breaks out*
Bean: LET'S TRY THAT AGAIN! *Throws another Poke Ball*
*Ralts doesn't manage to escape*
Judo: You caught it, nice work.
*Bean lets Ralts out*
Ralts: Ralts...
Bean: Ralts, welcome to the team. You are pretty intelligent. *Picks up the TM Ralts was using* You're the first female member of our team... hmm... you won't be able to become a Gallade. *Withdraws Ralts*
???: PIKA!
Bean: Actually, come back out! *Throws Ralts out the Ball*
Pikachu: PIKACHUUUU!!!! *Thundershocks Ralts*
Ralts: *Uses Will-o-Wisp*
Pikachu: PIKAPIKA! *Hurt by burn*
Bean: Now to catch it! *Throws Poke Ball*
*Ball shakes*
TBC
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Bean (2014-04-11 23:21:42)@Judo I realised that after writing that something was a little off. I'm re-writing that first chapter.
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Bean (2014-04-11 23:40:53)^ Good point. But I want the story to be as long as possible. :/ I was planning on you earning the badge in episode 3.
Redone the first chapter.
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Bean (2014-04-24 20:27:02)Judo: Finally made it to Original City. *Walks into the gym*
McFox: Hello, is this your first gym?
Judo: How did you know?
McFox: I know alot... Hehehe... So, battle?
Judo: Okay, go, Chespin!
McFox: Hmm... Go, Sandshrew.
Judo: You're making this easy.
McFox: Just one thing before we start, if you lose, come to Team Spam's base...
Judo: Okay. I won't lose!
Chapter 3: The plans, leaked!
Bean: *Walks into Original City*
Bean: Time to challenge the gym. *Looks at the gym's status*
STATUS: THERE IS CURRENTLY A CHALLENGER INDIDE
Bean: Damn. Judo beat me to it. -_-' And Connor has probably beat the gym already knowing my luck.
Connor: *Waiting nearby* Actually, I haven't.
Bean: Oh.
Connor: There are rumours of something happening in that gym, something that I hope to expose.
Bean: Why?
Connor: It'll make it's way to the papers.
Bean: Right...
*Judo walks out the gym*
Judo: BEAN! CONNOR!
Bean: What?
Judo: MY FIRST BADGE!
Connor: *Holds a notebook and pencil* Did anything... "suspicious" happen?
Judo: He told me to come to Team Spam's base if I lost. Strange...
Connor: Bean, you challenge the gym leader before me.
Bean: Okay... *Walks into the gym*
*Connor sneaks behind Bean, into the gym*
Bean: I know you're following me... *Opens the door*
Connor: Can I come in with you? To watch?
Bean: Okay, spy.
McFox: Oh look, another challenger, and his friend. I know... *Drinks his spam juice*
Connor: Multi battle?
McFox: Yes...
Bean: Good idea.
McFox: My partner will be... Team Spam's best scientist, Professor Morphic.
Morphic: Alright. *Walks towards the stage*
Bean: I think I know who I'll choose, GO! RALTS!
Ralts: Ra-lts...
Connor: GO! Charmander!
Bean: You're saving your starter for later, too, eh?
Morphic: Riolu, come out. More victims.
Riolu: RIOLU!
McFox: Houndour, come and show these kids!
Bean: RALTS! Use Psychic on Riolu!
Ralts: *Quiet* *Uses Psychic on Riolu*
Morphic: Damn, it's super effective!
Riolu fainted.
Connor: Charmander, use Flamethrower!
*Charmander uses Flamethrower*
Morphic: It's not very effective. Houndour, Dark Pulse.
Houndour: HOUND! *Uses Dark Pulse*
Charmander fainted!
Morphic: GO! BUTTERFREE!
Connor: Go, Fennekin!
Bean: Ralts, use Dazzling Gleam!
Ralts: *Uses Dazzling Gleam on the two opponents*
Houndour fainted!
Connor: Fennekin, use Flamethrower again on Butterfree!
*Fennekin uses the move, fairly damaging Butterfree*
Bean: Nice job.
McFox: Time for the tables to turn, go, Sandshrew.
Bean: Meh.
Connor: Oh crap.
Bean: Ralts, just use Psychic on Butterfree.
*Ralts uses Psychic, bringing down Butterfree*
Butterfree fainted!
*Sandshrew uses Earthquake*
Fennekin fainted!
Ralts fainted!
Bean: Crap... Go, FROAKIE!
Froakie: FROAK!
Bean: Use Bubble!
*The move does a decent amount of damage on Sandshrew*
McFox: Sandshrew, use Dig!
*Sandshrew digs*
Bean: HA! Froakie, use Bounce!
Sandshrew used Dig!
The attack missed!
Froakie used Bounce!
It's super effective!
Sandshrew fainted!
McFox: Okay, you both get the badges... *Hands Bean and Connor the Elemental Badge*
Bean and Connor: AW YEAH! OUR FIRST BADGES!
McFox: But first, come with me...
TBC
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little5 (2014-04-24 23:34:17)Gym Leader?
If so.. Fairy type
Pokemon:
Togekiss
Florges
Mega Gardevoir
Sylveon
Bean (2014-04-26 10:20:42)Chapter 4: Lord Goomy
Bean: Where are we going?
McFox: You'll see. It's a long walk. *Walks through a path*
*Bean and Connor follow*
McFox: It's an alternative path to Red Town.
Bean: Thanks.
Connor: WATCH OUT!
Bean: A horde of wild Goomy?
Connor: The weakest Dragon type.
Bean: Does it evolve?
Connor: It evolves into a psuedo legendary.
Bean: LET'S CATCH ONE!
Connor: Meh.
Bean: GO! POKÉ BALL!
Connor: Work...
Goomy was caught!
McFox: What about the other four?
Bean: RUN!
*McFox laughs*
McFox: I'm going back to the gym... *Walks back, then shuts the door*
Bean: Damn!
Connor: I'll leak Team Spam if I get proof of it's existence to show the police.
Bean: You figured they're this region's villains?
Connor: Yep.
Bean: Come on, let's get out!
And as the two reach the end...
Bean: DAMN! We're locked in! *Hit the locked door with their fists*
Judo: Huh?
Bean: Is that you Judo?
Judo: Yes.
Connor: Get us out!
Judo: Ok... Umm... I don't know how.
Connor: DAMN! Go, Fennekin! Go, Charmander! Both of you, keep spamming Ember!
Bean: If fire types set Grass types on fire, fire types will set a wooden door on fire...
Connor: You don't say.
Bean: Go, Goomy! Use Dragon Pulse! *Door starts breaking*
Bean: EVERYBODY! Froakie! Bubble. Pikachu! Thundershock, Ralts, Dazzling Gleam!
Connor: Look...
*The door explodes*
Bean: HOLY CRAP!
Connor: Froakie is evolving!
Bean: You don't say.
Froakie: FROAK! *Everything becomes bright*
Froakie evolved into Frogadier!
Frogadier: FROG! DIER!
Bean: Nice new look. Anyway. Come back! *Withdraws everybody*
Connor: Well, we're at Red City.
Bean: Let's go to the police first...
TBC
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BigMooney (2014-04-27 21:38:42)Fire Elite 4 if it's still open. (didn't read all comments)
I'd have:
Charizard (drought ability)
Blaziken
Houndoom
Delphox
Volcanion
Talonflame
Official Spriter For TUC
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Bean (2014-04-28 20:56:46)Episode 5: Bean VS Judo! Rival battle!
Bean: I might challenge the gym of Red city tomorrow...
Judo: I've already beat the gym.
Bean: Hey, why don't we battle? 3v3?
Judo: Alright. GO! MAGIKARP!
Bean: Go, Pikachu! Use thundershock!
Magikarp: KARP!
Magikarp fainted
Judo: When my Magikarp evolves, I will destroy you. Go, Eevee!
Bean: Pikachu, use thundershock!
Judo: Use Charm!
Bean: USE GROWL!
Judo: Use tackle!
Critical hit!
Pikachu fainted.
Bean: That did more damage than it should.
Judo: Critical hit.
Bean: Anyway, go! Ralts! Use Psychic!
Eevee held on at 1HP using it's Focus Band!
Judo: I found a random Focus Band on the ground, so I am using it. Use Shadow Ball.
Ralts fainted!
Bean: Crap. Go, Frogadier! Use Water Pulse!
Eevee fainted!
Judo: Go, Quilladin! Use Razor Leaf!
It's super effective!
Frogadier fainted!
Bean: I lost...
Judo: Here, take this. It's HM Surf. I obtained two of them.
Bean: Next time, it'll be different.
*Bean's phone ringtone starts*
*Judo walks off*
Prof Rob: Bean, I am the region's professor. Your starter was given to you buy me, really. I need to give you something. After beating the Red city gym, come to Miscellaneous City's Pokemon lab. I have a surprise.
Bean: I'll be there after I do two more things. Expect me there tomorrow!
Prof Rob: Bye. *Hangs up*
Bean: Alright. To the gym!
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epicpwner2003 (2014-04-29 00:19:51)^ Still open Gym Leader and Elite 4 slots.
...the noise the human language makes when it screams in agony. It is a pretty funny noise.
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