MeNobody14 (2013-05-07 19:43:12)

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"Give me my daughter." She said. Jerry looked at the girl. He couldn't see a resemblance. "Please." The queen said. "Then what will you do to me?" He asked. He wanted to get back to Angela and Rebecka. "I will let you go back to your friends, and pretend this never happened." The queen said. "I wouldn't trust her." One of the men behind him said. He increased pressure on the girls throat. "You lie! I will only be put in chains!" He yelled. "No! I won't! I swear it!" The queen cried. He let the girl go. She ran to her mother, and started bawling. He snapped his chain off of the shackles on his legs and twirled them around. He glanced behind him, and saw no one. Where did they go? He thought. "Come with me." The queen spoke. The exit gate had opened. He walked to the queen and her daughter. The daughter lunged at him and knocked him over. "Stop!" The queen shouted. The girl clawed at his face, and opened the scar again. He gritted his teeth in pain and rolled on top of her. He got up and jumped backward. The crowd started leaving. Not wanting to witness the possible death of the queens daughter. The girl got up and lunged again, but this time he was ready for it. He grabbed her arm and spun her around, and twsted it behind her back. The girl cried out in pain. "Stop it!" He threw the girl to the ground. "Liar!" He yelled at the queen. "Take me back to Angela and Becka! Now!" He yelled. The queen told her daughter to stay put. And led Jerry through the palace, to hus room. "Angela was put back in here." She said. "I am sorry, Jerry. For the way you have been treated." She said. He walked in and sat on the bed, exhausted. The queen followed him, and hugged him. "I should treat you more like family." She said. He just sat there. Thinking. The queen wiped the blood off his face and kissed his cheek. "You are my nephew. The girl was my adopted daughter. And, to tell you the truth.." She said, "I don't quite trust her." She got up and left. He found angela in the bathroom, washing her face. And Rebecka was in the tub, covered in soap. Her head hung out and he could tell she was asleep. Angela wiped her face off and turned around. She saw his bleeding scar and nearly tackled him. "What did they do to you?" She asked. She pashed him onto the bed and got a washcloth to wipe off the blood. "Who did this to you?" She asked. "The queen's 'daughter'." He said. "Why that little br.." Angela was interrupted. "Cool it, Angie. I'm fine." He said. He cringed. "Does it hurt?" Angela asked. "N-no.. Its.." He clutched his head. It had been a month since Angela gave him the anti-dote. "Are you ok?" She asked. "Its the headaches.." He said.

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AmayaTime8D (2013-05-08 09:15:54)

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Probably....
MORE
This is sooooo good your brain is like...
WOOSH

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kblackeagle (2013-05-08 09:23:15)

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So...when does my lawyer (Slendy) come in?

I love your stories! I was the 2nd who appreciated it!

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-08 10:11:21)

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He comes in when we leave the palace.

Btw: Instead of posting: "MOAR!" I'd appreciate it if you'd tell me what you think.

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-08 10:21:46)

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40th post!

He layed back and tried to concentrate. "Look at me, Jeremiah Peter Mansen!" She said, knowing what he was doing. He concentrated on her face, her voice. Clinging to all the memories and thoughts he had. "Thats it. Concentrate." She said. "I am!" He said. She put her finger to his lips to shush him. "Thats it." She purred. "Calm down, and breath." The headache passed within minutes, and he was relieved. "I want to see my parents.." He mumbled. "Shh.. Your hallucinating. Your parents aren't here." She said. The queen slipped in. "I want to see my parents." He said. "You can't." Angela replied firmly. "Why not?" He asked. "Because they might hurt you." She said. The queen stood quietly. Not wanting to disturb Jerry. Angela kissed him. "Hush now. You need to go to sleep." She said. She slowly ran her fingers through his hair, and he eventually fell asleep. "What do you want?" Angela turned to the queen. She didn't say it very nicely, but she didn't care. "I can bring his parents here." Alexandria said. "What if they kill him?" Angela asked. "They won't. I can ensure that." Alexandria said. "You can't keep him from them forever." She said.

Jerry awoke the next morning, feeling excited. He couldn't tell why, though. Rebecka was asleep next to him, and Angela wasn't in the room. He woke up Rebecka, and hugged her. "I see your better." He said. "Oh my gosh! Where'd that come from?!" She exclaimed. She sat up and brushed the hair out of her face. She examined the scar he'd been given on his face. It went from the top left corner of his hairline, all the way to his right cheek. "It's called 'Presidents daughter disease'" He joked. Diana walked in and told Jerry to come to the throne room. "Alright. Gimme a minute." He said. He put his Blue hoodie on and walked out the door, to the throne room. Why do I need to go there? He wondered. He walked through the maze of palace corridors, until finally he reached the massive double doors of the throne room. He opened one, and walked in. The queen, sat on her throne, surrounded by servants and guards. On the steps, was a really tall, white woman. She had her back toward him. She was wearing a 1940's style pink dress, with a pink sun hat to matche. Her arms, legs, neck, everything, were pure white. She turned around and gasped. Jerry gasped also, for the woman had no eyes! No eye-sockets either. Just a nose, a mouth, and a few defining features. She had short brown curled hair, which seemed an odd color compared to her skin. "Who are you?" He asked. The woman.. ghost.. Thing, stood there. Even though she had no eyes, she cryed. She nearly ran over to him and hugged him. "Jeremiah.." She said. "Who are you?" He asked again. "Slender-woman. Your mother." She said.

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kblackeagle (2013-05-08 10:33:56)

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40 was short! What was that about?

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-08 10:52:08)

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Had to take a shower.

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the2ndwii2 (2013-05-08 21:10:32)

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awsome 'O' you should do something like Jerry is alone in the middle of the snow/hills/sea/dessert

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AmayaTime8D (2013-05-08 21:28:13)

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Nice! I really like this story because CPs are awesome.
Slenderman is his dad then?

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-08 21:30:37)

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^Yerp.


Jerry alone.. He's been alone all his life. Being alone again might not be a bad idea.

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-08 21:49:24)

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Jerry stared at the woman curiously. She didn't frighten him, She comforted him. It was just a feeling, but somehow, he knew this was his mother. He didn't know what to say. He'd heard stories all his life about "Terrible" beings like this. But at the rate she cried, he hardly believed she'd hurt a fly. "Hi mom.." He said. "You don't know how long I've waited for this day.." She said through tears. "Its awkward.. Meeting your mother." He thought aloud. "It is, dear." She said. They embraced for what seemed like forever, and finally let go. "Where's dad?" He asked. "Your father is a Prosecuting attorney for a person named Alex." She said. "He'll be here soon."

They talked for awhile. Asking questions about eachother and such. He wondered if He was a CP aswell. He also wondered, how his aunt was a creepypasta. "What CP are you?" He asked her. She frowned, probably wishing he hadn't asked. "I am Scarette." She said. She stood there, and stared at him blankly. He wondered if she was alright, and soon saw the answer. She was tranforming. Her skin became a yellowish tinge, and her legs and arms grew longer. She became overall taller, and her presence made Jerry shiver. Her clothes changed from pure white, to a mix of black and grey. She hid her face in her hands. Her clothes were torn robes and a shredded cloak. Her crown was replaced by a moldy straw witches hat. She uncovered her face and looked at him. Her eyes were bigger, her pupils were smaller, Merely specks amongst a sea of white. Her nose and facial features remained the same, except for her mouth. Her mouth, was sewn into a smile. "Now you see me.." He couldn't tell if she was speaking, or telepathically sending him a message because her mouth didn't move. He looked at her in horror. How could a pale, beautiful queen become a demented and twisted form such as this? It suited her, though. Being the queen of nightmares and all. "I am hideous." She said. "I am Scarette."

A shadow formed around her hand. One second, there was nothing. The next, she was holding a scythe. She screeched and attacked him. "Whoa! Hey!" Jerry exlaimed. He jumped out of the way. She tore the sheets on her bed instead of Jerry's stomach. "I smell fear!" Scarette said. Jerry hid behind a wardrobe. "You cannot hide from your fears, little mouse." She said. "Kennedy said it right. 'We have nothing to fear but fear itself'." He said and dashed to another spot right as her scythe tore into the wardrobe. So much for the pretty dresses.. He thought. He tackled her. Knocking her scythe out of her hand and making it dissapear. "Stop it!" He said. She threw him into the wall and charged. "Ermagerd!" He joked. "There's a scare-lady chasing me!" This seemed to make her laugh, and she shrunk a bit. He dodged her. "You got anything in there besides straw?" He asked. She laughed again and shrunk some more. "Y'know, I bet I could scare you." He said. She stopped. She snickered, then giggled, then just burst out laughing. She transformed into her 'normal' self and laughed. "Ha! You cannot scare fear!" She said. Her dress was ripped, and it hardly covered her. Her hair was a mess, and her face was flushed. "Your a smart boy, Jerry." She said. She got up, and Jerry wondered if he should avert his gaze. "It's alright." She said. So you can read my mind? He thought. "Yes." She responded. "I'm gonna go check on mom." He said.

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AmayaTime8D (2013-05-09 07:46:39)

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Nice -b

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-09 08:23:07)

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Scarecrows: Ugly, and weird.

Girls: Scary, and weird.

Combine the two and you get Scarette.


I got the name when I was thinking "Scare It."

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MeNobody14 (2013-05-09 08:30:53)

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Jerry was walking through the courtyard when somebody crashed into him. "Whoa!" He said. "Sorry dude!" The kid got up and ran back the way he came. It was a blond haired knight-in-training. He was fighting a real knight.


And getting his butt kicked.

"Oof!"

Literally.

I jumped infront of the knights sword and in bounced at my jacket. I kicked his groin and he collapsed. "Whoa! How'd you do that?" The kid asked. "Easy. Invincible Jacket." Jerry said. The kid got up and held out his hand to shake. "'names Cason. And you must be the prince!" He saluted. "Pleasure to meet you dude! Err.. Sir! Sir Dude!" Cason said. "Calm down!" Jerry said. "Sorry!" Cason said. The knight got up and pulled lf his helmet. Except, Jerry thought it was a he. She groaned and let her hair fall to her shoulders. She had brown hair and freckles. She looked like Cason. "Meet my sis!" Cason said. Jerry's face turned pale as he realized he kicked a girl in the groin. "S-Sorry 'bout that.." He apologized. "No need. I'm fine!" She said. "Well, ok." He said. "C'mon Cason! We need to practice." She said.

He found his mother tending to some flowers. "Oh! Hello dear." She said and hugged him. "Why didn't I know my aunt was a fearthirsty killer?" He asked and laughed. His mother laughed aswell. "She didn't become like that until she became queen." His mother said. "What?" He asked. "Every ruler of the nightmare realm becomes a CP." She said. This scared him. What would he become? His inauguration was in three days, according to Diana. "Oh.. Ok." He said, Hiding his fear.

2 days.

He was in his bedroom, laying on his bed. Angela kissed him and tried to comfort him. "It's alright. You'll be fine." She said. "What if I'm not? What if I become a true monster?" He asked. "You'll never be a monster to me." She cooed and petted him. Angela was in "se-xay" mode. Jerry was in "Thinking" mode. "Your aunt could control it, right?" She asked. "She could control the transformation. That's all." He said. Angela caressed him. "You'll be ok." She said.

1 day.

"We have a threat." Rebecka said. "A note that you won't survive you coronation." She said. "Great! First I'll become a uncontrolable monster, then I'll be killed! I can't wait!" He said sarcastically. "You'll be fine. Me and Angie will watch your back. K?" She said reassuringly. "Fine.." He said.

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FrequentDeath (2013-05-09 08:48:11)

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This is a good example, not a separate thread for each part, great job, smart user.

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