Kiba (2012-08-26 03:36:32)

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Thats the end what do you think

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Kiba (2012-08-28 02:28:27)

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Plz comment so i can do better

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Kiba (2012-08-30 02:57:08)

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I dont know

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Kiba (2012-08-30 02:57:54)

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The End of me

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Kiba (2012-09-07 20:01:10)

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Next story starting soon

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Kiba (2012-09-08 04:14:34)

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The fire

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Kiba (2012-09-08 04:26:53)

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It was a clear,cloudless October evening.It was around 5:00.As I sat on the front swing in front of my 2 story victorian style home.I was just sitting there minding my bunisseus when my neighbor screamed BOO 2 inches from my ear.Lets just so if you sit in a swing and involentarly jump,it does not end well.(For me at least)

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Kiba (2012-09-08 04:37:01)

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By the time I had recovered from my inital suprise,I began to rag on my neighbor Me"WHAT THE BLOODY HELLS WRONG WITH YOU"
Neighbor: Well seeing as how its almost the halloween holidays,I figured I would prepare you.
Me: BY MAKING ME CRAP MY PANTS!!!
Neighbor: (To parents inside)Hes really jumpy as a hare isnt he?
Mom: (confused)what?!?!
Neighbor:I scared the hell out of him as I walked in.
Mom: Oh

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Kiba (2012-09-10 03:19:42)

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As I settled back down,I heard the slight rustle of fallen leaves.VERY FUNNY MRS.BRADY I KNOW... my scream was silenced as I heard the sound of a saftey being fliped and felt the cold meatel of a gun barrel agenst my neck.All 20 years of self defense traing told me to stand still.

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Kiba (2012-09-10 03:29:26)

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Turn around slowly.Said a voice in a heavy french accent.I complied now scared as hell about my mother in the house.As I realized the man threatening me was about 4 8" and I was 5 9" I knew I could kick his ass.Without warning I lashed out with my foot aimimg just under his jaw.As he wwas falling I jamed my foot under his elbow joint of the hand that held the gun and brought it over my knee.He screamed in pain and anger and fired the gun,but as he was held down,blind,and had a broken elbow the shot was worthless,or so I thought...

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Kiba (2012-09-10 03:30:52)

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To be countinued comments on how to improve the story can be posted below

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Kiba (2012-09-11 02:09:48)

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plz comment

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pokemoster101 (2012-09-11 02:59:56)

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great story!

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Kiba (2012-09-12 02:23:19)

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Thanks ;D its only my second one

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Kiba (2012-09-13 01:29:14)

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It turns out the shot was not harmless at all.It repctured our propane tank,whick blew up setting my beautiful home on fire

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