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Kiba (2012-08-21 01:43:49)Chapter 1
I woke up to the usuall anoying drone of my bedside alarm clock.I rolled over,slid on a pair of shoes and pounded the button to shut the alarm off.As I truged down the stairs to have my cereal and coffe,my phone rang,nearly giving me a heart attack,hmm must have forgotten it in my pocket,I thought drowning out the tone of kesas voice.Wait kesa is for unknown callers, so who could this be?!
2012-08-22 02:59:00
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Kiba (2012-08-21 01:58:18)Chapter 2
Now im going to be honest here,I had no idea who the hell was calling me.Did I forget to mention it was 4:30 on Sunday morning?Anaway I let it ring untill I heard the beep signaling I had A missed call.I looked at the screen just as a text came in
From:Restricted
Sent: 4:34 A.M
Recieved: 4:39 A.M
Hey Joe,just saying a tip so you dont topple.Dont pass the rubble or thell be trouble.just hobble along the cobbles
JFG
By the time I was finished reading,my hands were shakeing so hard my phone was a blur.My wife walked in from the bed room and said phone call He says his name is JFG...
2012-08-21 02:02:38
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Kiba (2012-08-21 02:11:27)Chapter 3
I took the phone with trembling hands h-h-hello I managed to stammar.Yes is this joe?Y-ye-yes w- what do you want ill do anything?!Oh its not what I want thats imporant.W-wh-wha-what do you mean m-m-m-mr.JFG?All I mean is dont talk to strangers.Your house looks great.H-h-how do you know?There was a knock on the door...
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Kiba (2012-08-21 14:29:34)Thank you for commenting this is my first creepy pasta so im a bit anxious about writeing it
2012-08-22 02:57:16
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Kiba (2012-08-21 14:36:37)Chapter 4
It turns out my wife heard Mr.JFG over the phone and when she heard the knock on the door she screeched and ran to get a bat.Tell your wife if she get a bat your house will be pretty no more.HONEY PUT THE BAT DOWN OR HE'S GOING TO BLOW UP THE HOSE!!!!W-wh-wha-what do y-y-yo-you want I stamered again?CKICK The line went dead.
2012-08-22 03:00:54
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Kiba (2012-08-21 14:44:01)Part 2
Prolouge
As it turned out Mr.JFG as We knew him was out to do more then scare the living hell out of my wife and I.I figured this out when I heard the shattering of our front window...
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Kiba (2012-08-21 14:46:29)Chapter 5
HONEY GET IN THE BEDROOM MR.JFG BROKE IN.!!I screamed to my now screaming wife.WE NEED TO CALL THE POLICE!!my wife screeched once we were in the bedroom.TAP TAP TAP I wouldent do that if I were you Miss.Alision!HOLY HELL HOW DOES HE KNOW MY NAME?
2012-08-21 14:51:49
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Kiba (2012-08-22 02:55:08)Chapter 6
Hey Mr.JFG guess what I said finding my courage finally.What he replied.Door I siad driving the door open like an NFL lineback.
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Kiba (2012-08-22 03:05:52)Chapter7
You could hear the boom boom bang bosh as he rolled ungracefully down the stairs like a sack of potatoes.You could hear the ripping of our screen as he rolled ou the back door of our house.
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Kiba (2012-08-22 03:10:45)Chapter 8
With Mr.JFH dead or unconcious outside,I decided to call the police I dialed 9 nothing happendI dialed 1,nothing happened,I dialed 1 again and heard *You have succfully armed the bomb of Mr.JFG have a nice day*
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Kiba (2012-08-22 03:13:43)Chapter 9
Honey I said,not to alarm you but we have to leave the house immidetly.Why she asked looking confused.THERES A BOMB ARMED AND READY TO BLOW ANY SECOND LETS GO I screamed
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Kiba (2012-08-22 03:21:17)Chapter 10
As me and my wife bolted down the stairs and out the back door,mrJFG rolled over got up and went into the house not realizeing we were hideing in a side closet as we walked the last few steps to saftey Mr.JFG screamed WHAT THE FU- BOOOOM The house blew up.
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Kiba (2012-08-22 03:25:55)Epilouge
Its been 30 years now since that disastorus day.My wife and I wil never be able to recover the most important thing of all,Peace of mind.Though we were able to replace all our lost furnishings,we will always be haunted because the breaking of an important rule...
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This is A collection of stories
part 1
Prolouge
Hi,Im joe and Im gooing to tell you about a day that forever changed my life.This event has ben documented on several other softwear systems so when I seen creepy pasta I thought This was ment for me.
This story is purley fictional
2012-10-11 21:32:42